Definitely one of my favorite books here on WebNovel. It is a slow burn romance between Atticus and Daphne. The characters are well written and has depth. All chapters prior to the removal of magic is exciting and compelling. There is a regression and the excitement right after the removal of magic. I find thatq even that the trip to Nedour is not necessary for the book, but I guess Cordelia and Jonah needs to have a happy ending as well. Totally recommending this book!!!
I have to say it is a gem. A true gem i have read 45+ ch so far & it really good. i just hope mc can keep evolove in most perfect way..author please continue this novel you have huge potential...
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Well it had the qq farm system that is from one of my favorites novels and that's why i could still keep reading untill chapter 34, but the mc isn't likeable at all he doesn't take anything seriously,he's a coward, he doesn't use his systems at all to get stronger, when he almost died to a troll and continued being an idiot that doesn't take anything seriously at all i just couldn't keep reading anymore =/. I don't know if things change later but i'm not coming back to this if the author wants to write about a weak and spineless mc then don't give him a system even more when they are op as ****. If i were to give an iq to the mc it would be a negative one.
I found this in my recomendations and I can honestly say that I am very impressed with this novel. The quality of the story, so far, in regards to pretty much everything is amazing. The overall grammer and spelling of the novel is just awesome, and the world building has been great. There are some cliches but they are still added to the story pretty well. The character all have there own personalities and thoughts, and I appreciate how the author changes POV every so often to let us see into the minds of the main characters (he states whos POV it is as well). The authors titles for the chapters are funny and overall very good which gets me excited for what I’m about to read. The only thing I question about the story so far is how early in the book Exedra is to accept things like killing and exterminating bloodlines over something that didnt really hurt him. Which happened on only the second day of him being there. Other than that I am honestly shocked at how good this novel is despite it being the authors first novel. If you are into fantasy, reincarnation, and a bit of seggs this is a great story (though the seggs aint necessary). P.S. the seggs are pretty good.
Author-special-five-star-review!!! Version 3!!! (Probably final version) Thanks a lot, to everyone who’s taking their time to read through all my stuff. I really don't know why I thought it was a good idea to put a suicide scene in my synopsis… It not like it’s a story defining scene in the novel or anything either, it’s just a part of a side-story that I love very dearly. Layla Pog T_T Anyway, in this review, I’ll try to explain my story and why you should read it. And just like how the review system works, I’ll divide this review into four parts (Writing quality, Story, Characters and World-building) and give my thought process on them. Writing quality: Most of the story, you’ll see something similar to what I wrote on the synopsis. Since this was my first time writing anything, the novel had some problems which I've been trying my best to fix over time, but finally, I can confidently say that I've done a good job of cleaning up the story (for the most part). I can also confidently say that you will find typos, grammatical or punctual mistakes and some repeats of words and expressions and whatnot. (I did a spelling check like four times and I still find some mistakes here and there to this day. I'm sorry I’m a failure) Story - General feel: Alright, after you’ve just read the synopsis (or if you know the previous review I put here), you probably think that this novel is something grim dark and depressing, right? You’re right. At least, on some occasions. Those “some occasions” mostly being the side stories and the World building stuff that pops out throughout the story. But if I were to write a completely honest synopsis, it would probably go like this: [A 300-year-old spirit does slice-of-life things in another world. There’s also some stuff about him trying to achieve immortality, unearthing the secrets of the Final Empress, discovering the history of a broken empire, yada yada.] So yeh. Story – Themes Hmm… I guess the biggest theme in my novel turned out to be one’s identity. Although I want to explain this part a bit better, honestly, I’m struggling a bit with the concept myself, so I guess you can see me trying to wrap my head around it through Evin’s story. There’s also some more parts expressing such mind-blowing new ideas like: life sucking, war being bad, ethical dilemmas, ignoring morals entirely due to circumstances and then feeling bad, etc, etc. Story - Pacing and development: Warning: Slow story. If you don’t like slow stories don’t read. I don’t know how, but I’m able to write on seemingly the most mundane of things continuously, and most readers love them for whatever reason. There’s also the side stories that pop out occasionally. Obviously, I try to connect them into the main story and push the story ahead, but a lot of others will probably feel bored through it and want to kill themselves. That’s completely okay. Just leave the story and read a more fast-paced story; there’s like at least 16 of them on the site(I know since I tried counting them all). Characters: My goal when I was writing this story, is that every character could become a waifu for someone(even the MC! nANI?) and that they don’t just exist to further the plotline. Also, even if I don’t write about it on the novel all the time, I try to give every character a proper backstory (that exists in a very rudimentary way inside my head). This helps a lot in helping me decide what kind of actions they will take in certain situations. I’m also focusing a lot on giving the charas proper flaws and whatnot so they can get satisfying development and whatnot. MC: Also, MC will make dumb mistakes, suboptimal decisions, weird thoughts a lot of times. He will not be perfect, he will not always win, and he will not always be cool. So, if you want a self-insert power-fantasy story, then this novel is probably not for you. But I don’t want you to think that this novel literally has no satisfying moments. I’d write a bunch of stuff here to prove this point to you, but I feel that you should experience it yourself. World-Building: It’s lit fam. At least according to all the readers. And honestly, I really like it as well, so I spend a lot of time trying to keep things consistent and plot-hole free. Sadly, I do a really shit job at it, so feel free to point out any inconsistencies you may find and call me a degenerate human being for writing such low-quality content. Don’t worry, I won’t cry. Jokes aside, I’m actually thinking of taking a 1 or 2 week break to dedicate all my to fixing some stuff, but At any rate, that’s all for now, thanks for reading till the end. Enjoy.
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Not bad I would recommend this book for sure.
An extremely interesting story.Extremely perfect way of writing and describing.An amazing job.I love it immensely. Great work author. This story is just incredible.
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