good writing and start of the Story. i will ready more
I'm finally here to drop my own review after reading 33 chapters. I'm honestly loving it so far and I hope I will continue to love it this way. So far from what I've read of this writer's other works, I hope to also see those heated moment and scenes you write in the other books that makes one wish they were the FL.? don't mind me, I'm always looking forward to those kind of things.
The story,plot,setting,characters they are phenomenal.. but the writing quality is very bad. Pronouns, sentence construction, articles, nouns, etc are all wrong. Reading this type of quality is killing my own English but due to the brilliant story and exciting plot I can’t leave this story. Fix your grammar and you will find more people interested in your work..
So stupid, so stupid I have no more words .he every few chapter's reminds that angle has low birth rate and still didn't understand his value I couldn't read more than 20 chapter's. doesn't understand the consequences of his actions.
An awesome book I must say due to the few chapters I read. A strong and determined female lead that won't give up warms my heart everyday. I am buckling in for the adventure.
The world development in this novel is really top notch and compared to that I think the character development is a bit slow pace but hopefully it will soon get great details too. Just one thing, I would like to suggest you to not start every sentence in a new para with a 'The' I saw a lot like that and although I personally love large paras many people don't so try to include some single short sentences between the paras sometimes and use the spacing a bit better. Besides the story is going great and also I would love to see more of those character arts of yours so keep posting them too?
Thank you for this story ???Thank you for this story ???Thank you for this story ???Thank you for this story ???Thank you for this story ???Thank you for this story ???Thank you for this story ???Thank you for this story ???Thank you for this story ???
I absolutely love it! I just don’t know about the update schedule. Other than that, I can’t wait for another chapter!Hajriejabxiaaodjebdoa
The novel had a tough start but soon smoothen out towards the end. This review is based on the first 40 free chapters. Found two minor spelling errors (no Biggie) and the usage of Clone instead of Instances urks me as a gamer. There doesn't seem to have much storyline depth to it but it's a pleasurable read non-the-less for Tower Defense Fans.
I absolutely love this book. For one thing the author of this is at least some one I can relate to since we are the same age, which kind of attracts me to the story even more, I know it's not right to like the story the author-san worked hard to write bcuz of reasons like that but it actually appreciate the story even more. Love ur story hope u never drop this but i hope u consider ur health first. Hope for all the best.
Je n'ai qu'une seul chose a dire est c'est: QUE CE LIVRE EST JUSTE MAGNIFIQUE !!!!Que ceux soit vitesse de cultivation, puissance, autorité, arrogance et compassions du MC j'aime !Si l'auteur dit qu'il n'est que deuxième personne j'ai bien dit personne n'a le droit de se dire premier !!
Author forgets a lot, characters are bland. Lots of cliches and forced fights since the sects have to have their way. A lot of big seniors that come because their juniors get slapped.Only worth reading cause its free.