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please do not make a new romance with a ***** person who never deviates!I love your novel, some passage are funnybut make evolve your mc, especially a child of 7 years, it is curious and learns quickly, you can also make him undergo misunderstanding, as you evolve for my part I think it will add a soul to your novel.
this sounds really good and interesting. waiting for it to be picked!!! i love these types of unconventional xianxia novels!!!................
I think that if I really read this novel I would probele like it or I might not like it at all i am doing this to get experience so I don't know at all this is a lot of writing so if you read all of this I don't know why you did ? and if your a girl and you have snapchat add me /shadow gamer 21
The mc is absolute garbage he is average of the average so much so it's painful to read. Nothing remarkable nothing special nothing note worthy. Picture a day in the life of an average guy that's all this is but somehow this average person just gets lucky and hasn't died. He gets pushed around alot and smacked regularly he's pretty much a joke at best. Also the cultivation is just trash as well consume pills that's pretty much it. He has no set path and is just a random assortment of broken things he finds laying around sigh. It's just one big mess.
Zhanye , a story based in his own life being famous as Youtuber called "Zy" but he made shit after that, selled your friendship for R$200,00 in "Be a Member" in YouTube (Brazilian Reals) after that more shit , he got exposed for pedophile with nudes of a 15 year old girl and more shit joking about the situation 1 month after this
It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer.Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
Great story and grammar. It's amazing can't believe I didn't find this sooner, missing updates tho found it on other sites. But at least it's free here.
A Shameless 5 Star Review From the Author.Heads up to all of you!This is my first novel joined in a contest.Please support my other book if you liked this one!Things to Remember1. Grammar and I are still not that close, please bear with us!2. Don't kill me if you hated how I gave a very odd cheat to the MC.3. The story plot is chaotic! I apologize in advance.4. I need a plumbing paste for the plot holes that might appear in between chaps.5. Futuristic setting has different views depending on Author's perspective, if you want to see people using laser guns, this is not the right place!6. Characters will be as crazy as the author! How crazy can they get? Even I don't know?7. If you have something to tell about the story like how dope the MC is, feel free to comment! I'll try to respond to everyone.8. Last but not the least! Enjoy the story and have fun!9. Lastest but not the leastest! Please support the story! The author is pleading you to do it! If you support the story, may Urie's prowess affect all the games you're playing!That's all!
Story developing a little bit too slowly in some aspects, while focusing too much on one time event. Overall background as well as description of fights and MC decisions are sound and we even get some butterfly effects ! Enjoy and search with MC meaning behind the Art in Martial Arts.
Shit, I was still reading this on gravity tales when it was suddenly taken down. Even worse is that I was on chapter 435 but the chapters beyond 400 isn’t on the Webnovel app yet.
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