Good story..................................................................
The story is fun and instersting but the grammar is really bad and need an edit also the explaination about background story for each character is lacking and the flow of story feels rushed.
this one would be filled with braindead characters and super..forced..plot..Armour . . .
Pretty solid Start so far. Just need more chapters and this will be a pretty decent start for a new book. Cant wait for the next few chapters that are coming So we can see what his class will be.
trash with within trash mc treat is a tree yet think with his dick also treats his loyal subordinates just because he is a simp..............................
It's a good story but please update this story fast ☺️........................................................................................
The idea of the story seems alright but the author assumes too much like we are suppose to know all this info that the character somehow knows already like 2Seconds his in his world next his In another and boom he knows all the cultivation ranks Without any knowLedge of thAt World? Like what? If this is how it start maybe it will keep happening or the author will decide to make the mc a retard like all those other am a “noob” cultivator but am aCtually a big shot type of novel.
Sounds like an original and novel concept. I'm looking forward to giving it a try.
Normally it's hard for me to like the MC because they're either too OP or just so serious all the time. But I loved their friendship and I love the banter! I guess Edward can be funny with the right company. I look forward where the story leads from here.
“Books are the quietest and most constant of friends; they are the most accessible and wisest of counselors, and the most patient of teachers.”
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