Random review/update on my own book lol. Anyways, this is for Vol12 and specifically the story for ch276. I have put a lot of effort for this part of the story and was hoping if you get to read it, leave a comment or review as I really want to know how well it compares to other stories. The reason being is I want to know of ways to make it better or rather what you felt wasn’t good enough.
Excellent world building, scheming and emotional understanding
This book is so intriguing to read. A few misconceptions in the grammar but doesn't really affect the overall flow. Continue to do your best man!
A somewhat below average store novel. The translation quality seems good but the quality of the writing itself is quite poor and often leaves me confused. The explanations of the worlds power system, the mcs store systems features etc are all really scuffed. I still don't entirely understand the power system.How do you get levels? What is a mark and how do you get one? How did our protagonist get to level 15 if you need a mark to break past level 10? None of this makes sense. If it weren't for the above issues I'd give this a 2.75/5 but I'm settling with a 2/5 for now.
The few chapters that I've read clearly depicted the main character's suffering. Her fears and insecurity were alarming, bringing me endless suspense. The book is also veiled in mystery. It's a nice one.
Je pense que sais le roman avec l'intrigue la plus riche que j'ai jamais vu sur tout les + de 50 roman que j'ai lu ou continue a lire .
Super boulot Auteur merci !!!! en espèrent plus de chapitre !!!
Translation is messed up but good character and story development all around
Good intro
Well designed characters
Enjoying reading the chapter
Need more chapters.
Overall, it's a good book
Keep up the good work
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I very much enjoyed it, it is refreshing to see a wuxia novel be about an alchemist for once, and not about revenge! There is plenty of face slapping and plot moves right from the start.
Terrible writing. Utterly pukeworthy. The MC is proclaimed a genius by the writer of this train wreck but is completely unable to make sound decisions in situations where he has full information.
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FUTANARI!!! SÉRIO?! PORRA PQ FUTANARI?!!!!! QUE MERDA ESTRAGO TUDO!