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Hi. Just a stranger passing by, totally not the author. Great book, definitely should read. Some more words to fill the minimum. Here are some more.
Calidad de escritura (3/5), actualización de estabilidad (1/5), desarrollo de historia (2/5), diseño de personajes (2/5)
Fondo de mundo (2/5)
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Written by someone with a mental acuity of an edgy 14 year old, about edgy 14 year olds, and for edgy 14 year olds. Characters and plot are so cliche there is no suspense or intrigue, no surprises. There are no redeeming qualities whatsoever.
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Honestly, a very good concept and story that gives of house of horror vibes. Slight spelling and grammatical errors and it also feels as if some parts were missing , but still good
One of my favorite novels on the site. I decided to read it on a whim due to its name and was pleasantly surprised. The writing quality is pretty good with only a few mistakes and such. The stability of updates is the only thing I'm stuck on, but that's just because I want to read more of the story. Story development is really amazing and its nice how they haven't revealed what happens in the end yet. Character design is also amazing and I love the chemistry between the characters. World building is also really amazing with many unique tropes instead of just using overused cliches. Overall, amazing novel, highly recommend.
this first chapter is really awesome, but after that, the writing quality and story development becomes distorted. Its really poorly written, and the plot deteriorates.
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