It allowed him to channel kinetic energy through his leg, giving his shots an unstoppable speed and power. He had used it countless times to bend the ball in impossible trajectories, to strike with such force that goalkeepers simply couldn't react.Perfect ? interesting ? concise ?
Author you have to give character illustration in the photo thing where we can give popularity you know what I am taking about ..if you do that your views will soar...my friends an Author so I know a little bit about it ..good work ...
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So far it's looking pretty good, a typical reincarnation storyI'm looking forward to how the characters get fleshed out in the future chapters and the MC's past too
Review after 120+ Chaps. There are no spoiler, I'll only be brief with what to expect in the Novel.1# The author's writing style is very confusing and the novels premises still seem very unclear.2# You know the feeling of reading cheap Chinese trash novels, well this Novel is not cheap and trash but it gives feeling similar to that, it feels a Mish mash between Chinese and western novels.3# It has very horrible way to describe things, to the readers. It's almost like the author tries to give descriptive view but it's quite confusing and you're expected to understand what it means by ourself, not very comfortable.4# The power system and skills, abilities and what not are very troublesome to understand and comprehend. The Author has to realize that the Average Webnovel reader isn't too much into complicated power system, unless of course if you somehow make the next Shadow slave or even LOTM than that's understandable.Overall, I'd say the author needs to freshen up his writing and articulation skills a bit, I'd suggest watching some tutorials at YouTube it's surprisingly very helpful.That's all I have to say. If anyone wants to read this for OP MC and action intensive plot and lots of chaos and destruction than this isn't for you.
And so, as my colleagues have done, I shall do also - Shameless Author Review: Reading this, you can look forward to a lot.- First of all, grab your marshmallows, this will be a slow-burn... But only the beginning really, please don't be discouraged by this.- A game like system that revolves around kingship or rulers, as in the title.- Our Mc seems to have the opportunity to become a 'king'.- Quite possibly the largest succession crisis in fiction.- Expect questions. Loads of them. Answers will come as you keep reading.- Fantastic Politics. From family clans to King-making Clans...- World and Kingdom Building on varied settings, and Realms.- Plot Twists and Cliffhangers. ;]- Exciting and well choreographed combat.- A system inspired by the unholy matrimony of Jujutsu kaisen/Shadow Slave and yes... Solo leveling, not forgetting the dash of Naruto.- Did I mention questions?- A varied cast of characters with their own voice, ambitions and regrets...- Everything said and done by any character has meaning.- Even with his 'cool headed' nature. Our Mc will be tested, and will lose a whole lot.- And lastly, there will be cruelty, be it from the world or characters. Hence this warning: This novel contains graphic violence and cruelty. If you are sensitive to such content, please proceed with caution.- Despite this, there will also be hope and happiness. :]- Right! Not forgetting Chapters named by songs, till I run out...Anyway, enough babbling.Welcome and thank you for taking out the time of day to read this! :]Enjoy reading!If you have any questions feel free to drop them in here and I'll respond!
I love how there's a mix of all the supernatural characters. the love story between the ruthless devil and the princess is what I'm looking forward to. can't wait to see how they'll end up♡u2060(u2060>u2060u2060ਊu2060u2060
I have currently read up to chapter 565.This review will contain spoilers but I recommend people to keep reading because the entire story pretty much gets destroyed around chapter 500; and I wouldn't want someone to waste his time reading up to that point.Up until around chapter 500 this story was one of my favorite books on this site; the characters were interesting and the concept of having 2 main characters was extremely unique and entertaining.Unfortunately, for some reason the author decided to do the worst possible mistake he could have done, kill off 90% of the characters and story-lines.After introducing and developing many characters and storylines into the book, the author has decided to cut them all of all together by literally destroying the planet on which the story took place.To me it seemed like the author didn't like what he built up to that point and thus decided to completely restart the entire plot line, leaving behind many unfinished side plots, and characters who were introduced but not properly developed.To make things worse, after this "plot twist" took place, the main characters of the story who remained alive didn't show any signs of grief that should have taken place considering almost everyone they ever loved had died.Considering I had a truly loved this book before the major "plot twist" took place, I implore the author to please explain why he decided to make such a unreasonable change to the story.Thank you for reading this review, and sorry for any grammar or spelling mistakes that might have been in it as English isn't my first language.
I need to talk about the Yan Huaize situation because WOW. The text says it straight: "an invisible barrier had quietly formed between them." Pei Yunting knows about Li Rao now, and suddenly her childhood friend Brother Aze feels different. She's polite, she's distant, she's saying the right things but her heart isn't in it. And Yan Huaize? He notices. Of course he notices. He's the kind of character who reads people like books. But here's what destroys me—Yan Huaize watching Yan Huaijin and Pei Yunting exchange words "so naturally" and then quietly laughing at himself before leaving. That's not just acceptance, that's grief. He's grieving something that never formally existed. The text describes it perfectly: "The girl's natural sweetness... The boy's unquestioning indulgence... His heart slowly sank." Meanwhile Yan Huaijin is over there being a jealous mess who can't even handle his childhood friend talking to the girl he likes. Their dynamic has shifted so much—from "we wore the same clothes and slept in the same bed" to treating each other like strangers. And Pei Yunting is caught in the middle, thinking "The two of you are the ones competing with each other. Why do you always drag me into it?" She's not wrong. But the tragedy is that she's also starting to feel something for Yan Huaijin that she can't quite name yet. That moment when his hand wraps around hers and "something deep within her heart was quietly beginning to break free from its shell"—chills. Actual chills.
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All the boys followed the direction of this man, some yelling out "YES COACH!"