read up to 8 chapters. its pretty good this definitely needs more chapters. good work author.a few comments on points of improvement though, although its just something I want implemented and I hope youre reading this. the part where hes an actor, maybe add ideas that explores his abilities using acting in this cultivation world, like deceiving people and easily convincing them because of his act, and maybe make his acting, using charm to potential women.
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It has a great world background ☺️, innovative and it's fun Though I wonder why the f is the MC a fuckin' edge lord and he kinda gives off NTR'd vibes and don't say it's about cultivation he could have gone to a brothel to cultivate there. Damn a hundred chapters and no real smut scene (no edging ).
Liked the narration style which pretty much looks like a game; the pace was slightly fast but it's okay for the build-up as these are starting chapters. Now waiting for more plot twists!
The story and plot are both overall fantastic the story of course has a few typos amd homophone confusions ... Nonetheless it is fantastic so far
this writer writing skills and the English... MY GOD! FASCINATING ONE!
I've seen a lot of tales and know from experience when i see a good book. "Just Stay" i hope it just stays as good and consistent as it is. I know there's the urge to rush but please keep me smiling.... Nice
This novel is overall terrible sorry for being harsh but i have several ofher novels like this in my library and i decided to read them today and all i found was a waste of my time its like you all perfect your first ch and synopsis afterward it goes down the drain and many have other novels that are the exact same state its sad
It’s a great start and interesting world building :)
Well ......I can't say that this novel isn't interestingI'll be looking forward for the remaining chapterskeep it up big brotherLove you ?
good but many mistakes hope you improve.
As a fan of the rom-com genre, I like mostly the slow burn romance between Sakib and Meem. Yeah, I agree with other people who say that this novel has a similarity to Hyouka, Oregairu etc. But I have a different vibe from it. It is a combo of rom-com, mystery and slice of life. Mostly I like the way of low-stake and high-stake mystery. Anyone who likes low-stakes and high-stakes mystery with slow burn romance of a laid back character, I suggested they should read this.