i really like the plot and the personalty development of MC and only thing i want is that he kills *ay* Author please heed my words kill her in the most dreadful way possible
one of the best wuxia novels..........................................................................................................................................
Really good story, a little disappointed i cant read volume 5 righit now but i think the rewrite will be worth the wait. honestly one of the best things on here, the author knows how to write a cultivation novel. please just trust me, for your own good.
A very good start. the author didn't bore us with info dump. I'm loving it and how the story is developing. I hope the author reveals their past soon.
Great novel! Without all the „BAM“, „RUMBLE“ during fights. Good pacing when one is neither overwhelmed nor underwhelmed. Interesting plot and right amount of fun and cute moments. Keeps one thrilled about what is going to happen next.
Read till chapter 2 so far, and I can already tell the story is great! It's very entertaining since the writing quality is very good. A few error in tense but it's almost invisible to notice since it goes with the flow when it comes to reading. I also liked the fact that the author isn't aiming to win WSA, but rather to share his fantasy story to the world. So keep it up author you're doing great! And best of luck too??
Honestly can't give a book a good review, if I have to read a sentence 3 times just to understand what the author is trying to say, author just starts using words that seem to have just been decided on the spot, that are actually words, and I have to make a decision whether it's the actual use of that word, or something random and ignore it. If he is going to do that, he needs a damn glossary at beginning. Hopefully someone working on this will give it a re-read and edit and I'd love to pick it up again, and change my review
Pls update faster .. cant wait
I have always been writing fanfiction stories before, but this is the first time I write my own character so I don't know what kind of feels the reader can feel from my character's personality, and personally, I'm not really confident about this story since there is so much better story about reborn/reincarnation here besides mine and my English's kind of sucks. But here's I am proudly present to you my novel of being reborn and revenge.
Is the arnis is Filipino reference of the martial arts?
Anyway, it has a great start. There is a problem actually.
I guess to make this story longer is to explain the setting that would makes us/readers join in your world
But good job! For the new writer
I see a lot of hate for the author but you got to respect him for listening to our opinions and rewriting the story from the start even though he could have just continued
Haaa. Finished reading to the latest chapter and I'm stuck on a cliff again. Amazing. This is only the second time I've binged an original like this. This is a hidden gem and I'm surprised and pissed at how underpopular it is. What are you waiting for? Go start reading.In case you weren't convinced here's the review:Writing- 5/5 Reads like a published novel. Nothing to say here. It is a bit fast paced at parts and less detailed than your usual case-solving style novel. Written very well nonetheless. Very easy to imagine and everything is described well even with fewer details.Plot- 5/5Amazing so far. I usually end up predicting a lot of the plot and planting my flags, but here I had a clue in the middle of a few arcs maybe at most. Unpredictable plots but not annoyingly convoluted. Characters- 6/5THIS IS WHAT DID IT FOR ME. Among the best characterisation I've seen on this site. Not just the main characters, but all of them. The three things I loved the most in this novel were 1. Levi2. Sam3. The interactions between Levi and SamLevi's monologues, dialogues, behaviour are all very fun to read. The romance(?) is really well done. Exactly the kind of romance I like. If I had to give a comparision, it's somewhat similar to Hachiman and Yukino in Oregairu or Jo Minjoon and Kaya Lotus in God of Cooking. If you are sick of those CEO romance novels then give this unique take a read. Overall, must read. I've read 100s of originals on this sight and this is in my top 2 favourites. Suggestions for the author: There's nothing much I can say here. 1. In the starting few chapters there are some spelling/ grammar errors.(Very few of them hardly noticeable) Some places have comma instead of period. One place had slick blood instead of slick blonde. Couple places have wrong tense, wrong gender. I think you can fix it if you read it once :)2. For time skips within a chapter, you can leave a gap of few more lines or draw a line with stars********************************************************like this. It helps keep the imagination steady. Like seriously...there's no major flaws in the novels and I can only pick on things like this :pPlease keep up the good work.