Comment by PASSIVESPAMMER
Here we go again another pussy beta male mc who wants to hide behind the scenes.90% of novels follow this smae boring plot dropping this hot garbage and dropping novels on a whole. Evey book i read mc has to hide his identity why is it a trend? It's fing cliche.
The novel ended. I recommend looking for it's raw, it really is worth it. The translation on the webnovel stopped at a point where the author was detailing a lot, this for some may be a little boring, but soon after it returns to a very pleasant rhythm and chaotian appears again. As for the philosophical ending, immortality transcends the mind itself, the self must be abandoned in order to achieve it. After all, who knows if it's possible, it needs faith and just keep going. It was a good ending, characters were not forgotten, it is not a complete ending since there are situations to resolve, but I was satisfied. I like stories of Mao Ni, for me they are always very good., I hope to see new works soon, thank you.
I come here from time to time cuz of nostalgia !! this was my first WebNovel, so my starting standard was way high for other novels ...just can't seen to find that satisfaction i felt while reading this novel till now......
...wish it was back....
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A fresh story line. It is interesting to read a story about an MC that has recurring dreams. Your story has potential to develop into something great.
keep on writing, would love to see an update!
This is an amazing book! The synopsos really suits the book! I relly like how you developed the characters in the first few chapters! There are things that you could potentially improve but other than that I think your book is great!
Honestly, I’m only a few chapters in, but I can say that I’ve really been enjoying the read. As long as you overlook a few minor spelling mistakes, everything about plot, characters, etc. is great. It often seems random, but in a good, natural way.
Your synopsis grips me first, then the prologue which really explains everything to come in the book. Though sci-fi is not my cup of tea but when I see a good story I won't hesitate to dive in. Well done on your plot development, the well-detailed description of your characters and scenes, it really progresses the plots. Also, your grammar is good and the plot moves at a steady pace.
I can write another one ohohoho
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yes i leave a review on my work work?? thank you for choosing my book, i hope you enjoy it (eventhough it's not that good) leave a comment and tell me how it is for you ???
I really like this novel, i do hope that it will continue to get translated. Despite what people say, i think MC is actually a pretty well build character compared to other mcs. I'm not saying he is like a full fledged 3d person with full fledged meaningful emotions, i just think he is better than most. Also, the stuffs about first realm and second realm seems a bit later in the story, so i really want this to be translated at least till chapter 100 or somewhere.