Nah, this was good. Of course if you’ve read many novels with the same setting you’ll find it boring and repetitive but I found myself laughing many times cause the mc is hilarious and his thought process is weird but enjoyable.
The su xian’er girl is SO BADDDDDD like she hates hypocrites but SHES ONE and she’s also annoying
Everything's fine, from the inconsistencies of the cultivation levels to the small(or big) plot holes that I've noticed. However, what's not fine is that, every girl seems to be almost raped by everyone until mc comes. What's also not fine is the choice of words of the translator/s or editor/s, for example, using the word "r*pe" instead of "assault" or "violate", for real, this novel is so uncomfortable, it feels like the author has some fetishes for like nearly raped girls or something, also nearly every man that have 2 or more chapters screentime are horny b*stards that just want to rape every girl, f*cking sh*t I'm done with this garbage.Feel free to criticize me, correct me or something, maybe I'm the wrong one.
The story at first felt like it will go slow, but I actually found it not so after the first chapter. Thinking about all the other books I've read, it usually takes at least one chapter to start getting going. If you think about books who start hitting it off the first paragraph, they usually burn out quickly. I don't feel like this will.
Very happen with how's it's turning out. I've read Anthony's other books from the past and he has become a better writer.
God Bless you for your gift Anthony.
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Bro Hari, make the pacing a bit more slow. Cuz everthing is happening so fast and its like a brief of the story. AND MAKE A COVER PAGE FASTT!
After reading first 17 chapters here is my review.
Writing Quality: Writing Quality is good without any spelling mistakes or any grammatical errors. The sentences framed are easy to understand without any colourful words making it pleasing to the eyes. If u like novels with don't use complex sentence with direct conversations with slight comedy u might give this a try.
Story development (CHP 17) is consistent and does not jump from one point to some other random point like some other writers do leaving their readers to guess what happened between.
The story initially may seem somewhat cliche but hey as a responsible reader we must leave sometime for the authors to weave their story right?
Update stability is Ok..might seem low for some MTL Veteran readers but I prefer quantity over quantity
World background: The world background hasn't fully explored yet I advise author to prepare a glossary chapters for it as it might help readers to give them some basic understanding.
overall this story has potential and I hope u(author) keep cooking and get contracted ASAP?
I will return when it has over 150 chapter
I’m in love with how cute each boy is! I wish I had this type of love triangle when I was in hs.
I have a question, will Analyn end up with 2 men instead of just Ambrose? Please I was liking the story and just want to know if they will end up together without sharing
I loved this book
Best One ever ...