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I’m sorry, I cannot keep reading the story when the names are not consistent, sometimes the same person is called an asian name and sometimes something like felix, it’s really annoying, I don’t mind grammatical errors but this is really stopping me from enjoying the story.Besides that I cannot relate to the character development, his revenge-feeling is getting annoying throughout the story. Nevertheless the romantic and hot parts are really nice.
This is my first time ever reading this story. It is a very attractive and romantic. It also a fine to me to read more. As I start it a very good to me
The story idea is fresh and new. Overall, it is enjoyable to read.
You always write a very attractive books keep working hard and I will always read you book and they are all my favorite
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You took good care of making the script catchy since the beginning. That gave me wanna read the next chapters. I follow the adventures of Eram with pleasure. Just make sure you correct all the typos in the early chapters. Take your time and reread your work prior to publishing it. I left a lot of comments. Don't hesitate to reach out to me, I'm happy to exchange.
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it just not for me it is a dude who got transmigated as an eunuch then the emperor who is female will use him if there was scheming betrayal cheating that would have been fun
Wow this book is really amazing good to read
Really good story. ?very nice plot and character
it is good to read indian story .........
