hey there. I'm not sure if it's just the first chapters, the translation or whatsoever but the amount of gold is driving me crazy. he started with a certain amount but despite that he keeps spending a luxury amount even not having much revenue. It's really frustrating the math doesn't match lol ? also this system is too unrealistic, I mean, you should at least set a certain amount of rules how stuff works and not poping up out of blue. nevertheless, Im enjoying the development, I'm used to skipping a lot of paragraphs in novels because of fillers and how authors often keeps slowly explaining and repeating and keeping the reader busy just to make some chapters. Wich is common and I don't blame bc I'd definitely do the same but it sucks nonetheless. anyway, your writing skills are clean and fine without regressive thoughts and it's really cool read such a novel despite the stuff I said.
Writing Quality:5/5 Perfect.Stability of Updates:3/5 Irregular updates sometimes every day or every 2 days.Story Development:3/5 - Nothing interesting that has shown up it feels slow which is i'm not a fan of.Character Design:3/5 Personally the main character confuses me, Sometimes he feels like an ***** but sometimes like a kid.World Background:4/5 Seems pretty good enough.
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Starts off extremely predatory, and then barely focuses on that aspect, but in the story it makes sense so not an issue yet considering pace of story and current number of chapters. Translation is trash and in the later chapters seems worse than MTL. Unless the original author was just very dumb. A lot of things are very unclear, the thought processes of some characters are inconsistent, but the story is progressing at a reasonable pace… kinda. Everyone is still in mortal stage, and foundation stage cultivators are considered a supreme fighting force. Not sure how well planned out the growth of the story is, but pretty solid start if you turn off your brain and just read the story. Also I think she is a crossdresser or thinks she’s a guy, but is a girl. You’ll know when you get there, because of translation it’s not easy to confirm
finished reading this just now, 700+ chapters. and then it basically compressed maybe a few hundred chapters in a single chapter just to finish the novel. what a disappointment.
this is a brilliant story with a perfect blend of story, power and most of all it relates to how an actual cultivation society has a huge power imbalance. the way to achieve strength is so close yet so far.The cheat is a lot down to earth and still the title does justice to the story.This is just a masterpiece in making.Webnovel should just start translating the stories from pilot read this time instead of letting them rot in trial read.
This novel will be my number two. My number one is my Vampire God novel. Please feel free to comment any requests in my chapters. I'll reply to any comments as I see them. Love ya guys,Ellendria
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Hoo boy I am really liking this so far! Please update soon~~I just read everything in one go, so I don’t know about the stabilities of updates yet and I am already writing this review and I’m kind of too lazy to go back so I’ll give you four stars bc I realllyyy like this story. I’ll be waiting for the next chapter!
As this story has not been updated in a long time, I do not recommend you the reader read it until it gets updated, which is probably never.