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I shamelessly give you 5 stars because i love all fanfic novel ATG and not only that but i think your writing quality was good enough. I hope you don't rushed this novel...
This is totally my type of novel. Just a place holder review .
Have a lot of potential, good writing style but I will wait for more chapters for a honest review
Start is good, but need more release rates, waiting for more chapters,
hope its more different than SAO
with this 140 characters are complete
I've read both this and My vampire system, there's obviously been... inspiration from the latter but to be honest this just has a better story. I MUCH prefer the characters in this novel, even the MC is better in my opinion and all the other characters just mix so well. When reading Vampire System it feels so unnatural at parts and the characters(including mc) seem so half baked to me, while this novel really improves upon that aspect. The ONLY criticism I can call out is the grammar and such, it's obvious English isn't the authors's first language but still fairly better than most out there and there's a clear improvement the further along the story goes. IDK if the author has dropped this or not but I VERY much hope he continues on this some day, I definitely recommend to read this.
Hey just wanna say ive been waiting for taming/per novel for a while. i have to say i like what ive seen. The only thing lacking is a sense of urgency but i guess thatll come later after all the first interactions and character presentations is over with. (Up to Ch.4). Keep it going.
This is very nice, everything is written nicely and fleshed out well. Cant wait to see more of it and definitely adding it to my library
i haven't even read it yet but I'm going to read all 100 of these chapters just for you. I'm currently in the process of trying to make my own novel for WN and I would atleast like someone to do this much for me. sorry it didn't go well but I'm sure regardless of the preferences of WN users this novel is great
An incredible first chapter! I am thrilled with the main subject and looking forward to read the next chapters. I think, this is a very promising new novel.
I'm sorry, would you like to exchange reviews with me?
Another new book! I hope you guys like it.