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Once you start reading you will be instantly hooked as I was. The characters are provided with great description as well as the setting, so it helps with visualizing. Not really good at reviews so hope you trust and give it a try.
Okay. I like this so far the plot looks solid and I am curious to see how it unfolds!
increvel que paressa e uma historia muito boa para personaguens OP hoje em dia e muito dificil achar um com consistencia beirando op com raciocionio espero que continue ate o final mesmo que a atualização demore muito mais que termine a obra <3
I'm reading this on wattpad but i can't read there anymore I don't know why. Even if I refresh my wattpad, it's still loading. Gladly, it was here. Thank you
SPOILERS BELOW!!!!!!! Well I enjoy the premise of the story and I quite like Samuel as a character. However I feel it would have been better for him to wait awhile to atleast settle down and actually enjoy having a “father”&”mother” etc. In the first 30 chapters alone he’s gone from being blind to adopted to straight publishing a book now talking about starting a company, it feels very rushed especially considering he’s only been adopted for 1-3months (inc mini timeskip’s) that’s also not considering the fact he’s 10 years old. Well just thought I’d give my opinion i enjoyed what I have read so far.
It starts out fun and entertaining but you should drop it as soon as he begins interacting with other countries. It just goes on and on about how racist and greedy other countries are and how kind, gentle, welcoming, friendly, and generous china is. It felt like the author had a gun to their head and was being forced to write propaganda.
Author has a good grasp of storytelling and it was enjoyable to read through. There were hardly any grammatical errors, and if there were, they did not deter readers from the experience. This is an interesting story with a breath of fresh air.
I also immensely enjoyed the author's way of captivating the readers with rich imagery and painting the world in our minds.
But most of all. The banter. Oh my god, the banter is probably my favourite part. Some writers can write natural dialogue and some struggle with it - but this author is great at writing dialogue.
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What next? Rearing pigs? or Cleaning bathrooms? .
Garbage, i know we all use this word alot around here but my god i can't find any other word to describw this thing.
The first 60-70 chapters were pretty fun to read and i though this would be the next system novel to pop off but then it was as if the author didn't want to write a system novel anymore and instead started a generic plot line about immortality, dude, i came to read a system novel, if i wanted to read a adventure novel i would just go re-read legend of the great sage.
The mc is the plainest thing ever, no desires, no motivatoon, no real thoughts, he just reacts to whatever happens in front of him, the side-characters? what side-characters? completely forgettable.
MC transfers to this world and possesses a system-like thing which requires him to perform a task. Should he fail to accomplish the task, the system turns back time to when MC was first given the mission. It keeps doing this until he is able to accomplish what the system asked of him.
On another note, this is probably one of the funniest MC's I've ever read in any novel. The author has jokes everywhere throughout each chapter and MC's interactions with other characters is also pure gold.