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The story idea is just awesome, I was in love with it the moment I read the synopsis. I hope the author continues the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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This is the best book I've read in this genre. The writing is seriously straight from heaven. I am Looking forward to read more chapters as well as new books from you man!! you can really make it to the top...
(p.s I'm recommending this book to everyone)
I love how the author described the characters, the bacKground and the story in general. i love how it has hints Comedy i like to see that. if your into these type of storys i highly recommend
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Let me start by saying that at first i loved this novel, the fight scenes were okay but the devolpment and romance combined with an interesting world left me very pleased... until it didnt. my main fault lies in the lack of morals and empathy in relation to some characters, im all fine with joke characters and understand the intended humour in poking fun at someone. (If its innocent) However there is litteraly a character (greenhat) who has a fight with his girlfriend and immediately she cheats on him with two of her friends only to just get back with him saying she always loved him but was mad he didnt run after her. The two friends then act smug about taking advantage of the depressed girl and sleeping with her.. the female lead then laughs with them and says “haha he deserves it” ... i lost all respect for the character and couldnt continue unfortunately. it sucks because it just felt so unnecessary and ruined an otherwise enjoyable read.
Its pretty good and has a little potentialIm not really sure what to say about it but the creativity is decently so I hope you can continue
Don't have any complaints I really like all of it great story up to chapter 59 :D.......................................................................
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I am reviewing my own story. I recommend you give it a try. it is a story of a guy who gets stronger by eating an exotic beast in a parallel world. I hope that you will like it.
I know this question is dumb but Why would he need to grow as a person when 'he's' a dungeon core? It's like asking a donkey to become a better lion?. Also that paragraph that supposed to be hyping the story always crack me up, I mean "Evil gods introduced new species that have the ability to change the world! will the so called righteous god allow? or nah?" or something so obvious like this?