Why does this still not have the Yuri tag?
I read 2000 chapters of this novel and I will tell you. It is absolutely not worth it at this point just read martial peak. MC has 0 character development. Is arrogant as sh*t and equally stupid, dives head first into trouble even though he doesn't need to. You will feel frustration because of the way the MC handles things, because almost all of his choices are emotionally charged. And the romance is none existent as well. With the premise of this system the MC could have gotten so much stronger if only he had more than 2 braincells to work with. The system and its premise had potential but not the MC.
bruh
It’s a great novel, is a light and fast read. 12/10
Here's the thing: the novel itself, the story, the writing, all of that.. are perfect. But, the translator uses some words that annoy the shit outta me. For example, the word "totally" is used way too often when it doesn't need to be there. I know it sounds small, but it really takes me out of the experience.9/10 a top tier novel
Its' a great story!!
super good !
but kinda feels a bit mechanical (tiny bit)
I recommend this book to anybody interested in meaningful romance! I have come to like this author's works after reading Wife Of The Demon Prince. I rarely shade tears for books, but she successfully made me shade tears in that book! and after reading the other one, I am here now ready for another rollercoaster ride with her new book even though I'm not a fan of contemporary romance, I will give it a try because of her!
Mark my word if you don't read this novel, you will regret it! Well... or not since you won't know how good this novel is.
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story pacing is extremly slow and have lot of unnecessary description. like how when he woke up,opening door,wearing shoes. It’s description is taking over 65% story.I think the author should changr this things or else everyone become bored of this
Alright, the score is pretty low, but it's reasonable... I think. anyway.
Translation quality is OK, but could be better. the phrasing is quite bad to be honest. If the author wrote it like it's translated, then this must be their debut work, because it feels really... I really don't know how to say it, without ****** people interpret what I've said in a wrongly. but, the ******st analogy? emmm.... Childish, but planned. or is very innocent in a way, but at least the story it self seems to have been planned ahead properly.
The MC himself, is quite childish also, or even quite innocent. it's like a man was put in the body of a child, and the childishness seeped in, and erased the *****, but left the memories of the future. Also, things seem to go rather well for this MC, but it's strange. I honestly have no interpretation of why I think this series has a strange flow, but I have this weird feeling as I read it. not a bad feeling mind you.
World background... Again, I must say, 'honestly', the world isn't as of yet too far thought out, but the actual 'world' around the character seems to be developing, like, housing market, stocks and so on... oh, and computer development.
I wish this MC could think of smart things to do with the internet, it really wouldn't be to hard to make a website worth money around that time, it would just take a bit of development, and financial stability. but, as long as he invented YouTube, he'd be fine. I think it isn't banned in China, so it should be fine...
And my final conclusion to my thoughts about this story...
Read it if you wanna, It's not the best, but it has some interest elements to it. So if your here for lighthearted rebirth or should we say, revert to an alternate time line, 18 years before, where the MC isn't a genius, but get's a better body and memory right off the bat as a consolation prize, but doesn't know how to truly capitalize on his future knowledge, however, does in fact know how to make Some use of the new body. My last thing to say is: The first chapter is BS, it almost makes no sense except TRYING to explain to you, the MC was all of a sudden, reborn for no apparent reason. Apparently a different, and even better body/memory.
However, it doesn't really explain, If he was suddenly reborn, or if he was reborn for quite some time, and this is likely the translator/editors fault for confusing me. and I must point out, that the Author really wanted to get the character out of high-school, but still give the character SOME very minor Introduction and slightly developing the world background.
and to finish off what I'm saying... the Story is very fkn high paced, has a very small character development phase, but as I said at the start, I'm pretty sure this is the authors debut piece, or best work at the time of release... if not, then I truly feel sorry for this author, being able to write, but is inadequate in their understanding of the human psyche, emotions, rational and thus creating an inferior product, that is unworthy of their actually writing talents."
This was an okay novel. It was a struggle to get through all 40 chapters. I found myself unusually bored while reading. I had to force myself to finish the novel.