Lovely storey, its original and an anti hero Mc like this is a breath of fresh air
The only bad thing about this story is that there is constant errors in writing such as spelling mistakes or contextual errors (I.e: calling the mc a her or having some parts in French while the rest of the story is in English. Although the language mishaps are extremely rare) but it’s a good novel and I can’t wait for more!
The writing quality is excellent, grammar is great, updates are rolling, and story development is awesome. The characters are cool but i'd like more description of what they look like and what their underlying motives are. The world-building is fantastic but I'd like more environmental description. This story hits just about every checkbox except I notice that the story is too often dialogue without anything else, so add that and this story will be elite.
Feel free to look at my story "Avatar: Macai's Journey". Cheers
Great novel, best one by easyread yet. You can clearly see how much better the author got through the experiences gained with his other novels.
Honestly, I'd love it if this was turned into the primary story by the author even if I understand that the other stories need to be finished for their fans too.
Thus definitely has a lot of potential as a gamelit / litrpg scifi novel tough.
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nice story I like it very much it's nice story please rate it it's very nice ghost story let's enjoy the story I'm happy while reading it support it
10-chapter review read: I love how the paragraphs flow into the next, the story, the occasional comedy, and the author's notes.
Is this worth reading? Yes. Leveling with blood system, world and magic monsters... it's a refreshing read
the story really has potential theres no grammar mistakes so its a smooth read, theres actual logic and reasoning behind how he uses his magic and combines spells etc. im writing this review at chap 31 so obviously there hasnt been a lot of progress but i do hope for more interactions with other characters who are also (hopefully) well written. for the other characters i mean not just dickriders also people who dislike him/ have business with him etc. overall grat potential def give it a read and i hope the updates keep coming steady
Concept is interesting, but the story is mid. Writing quality is good enough.
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It was very good to read this ,
You have saved me from depression.
I was about to kill myself but your novel the Phaser saved me
I will never let go of this feeling
I owe my life to you
Read like 30 chapters. Story still doesn't make any sense and mc is an Idiot
new genre by dream! what else do you need to give it a try! well planned, well written and a well developed story :))daily updates so no worries regarding the update stability!nice one, (highly recommended)
An honestly entertaining story with a concept that I haven't heard before. Keep up the good work?.