I'm a fan of vampire stories so i like, the storyline sounds interesting and im captivated to read more and see what's gna happen. Author good job.
Honestly, I started writing this because I wanted the Author's badge but I have come to enjoy the world building aspect so much that I haven't stopped. It starts slow then goes really quick. It's suppose to feel like that. I enjoy giving the characters their "chibi" moments so it happens when it's appropriate to the story. I hope it's at least a good read on a slow day. Peace out!
Have read through 25 chapters, the novel has a check in system novel but the MC is different, funny and isn’t a generic copy like all the other check in novels. The story seems kind of interesting too. Characters also don’t feel too one dimensional as compared to the other check in novels. Highly recommend everyone to read before giving a one star review.
Thank you for checking out my novel. I will be updating this novel daily.The plot of the story is based on virtual reality, and the experiences the main character, Vicky has in and out of the game.Each character has a complex personality, that I hope you guys will love throughout the story.Please feel free to leave comments and reviews about the novel. I hope you guys enjoy ^-^
The story is getting more interesting with every part and seems real and i always appreciate the choice of words and the language so keep it up and am waiting for the next part
I dont get why you added reincarnation in this novel if the guy who got reincarnated will just be a stone i mean he will do nothing and act like one of those temperamental and trashy anoying system also if you read the story from the pov of stone guy it gives ntr and voy**er vibes also the rei guy acts like a 3rd rate trashy villian with 2 brain cells and common senses of a donkey and the reincarnated guy does nothing more than tell him to eat vegetables and makes convenience items like toilets and what not and i am not some professional author or somthing but this just feels like you are writing on the fly without planning enything over all trashy novel with trashy character
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First things first I am dropping this book is great. The world building is well done and everything seems organic with nothing being too forced. There is nothing much to nitpick about. But unfortunately i am dropping this book as it is too slow for my liking and goes against the traditional power fantasy ideas. Its great reading power in numbers once in a while but this is just not my type. Hoping for the best for the author but I will have to sign out.
Fast updating and better than most translations and MTL out there. also story amazing and addictive. Mc I also evil and cunning and is far from those cliché ones. I hope they can keep this going. I need more chapters....
hm... where should i start, so the characters, the worldbuilding is just perfect to my taste. That said, this webnovel gives me real demon slayer vibes. And author, if you're reading this review, give us a few more chapters, I beg you. Pleeeaaaseee
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The story literally starts at chapter 14, the system is interesting, but literally 80% of the writing it other unnamed random character re explaining what just happened 3-5 times, or random characters pitying, or judging, or chattering 7-8 times, fr its constant, so unbearable I really hope this doesn't get picked