Grammar is terrible. Plot makes 0 sense. There is 0 world building, and I still don't know what the **** is happening. Lastly, the retardation level is over 9000.
I'll give it a 5/5
The novel lacks the plot/story. it's not appealing at all even though I have read 70 chapters. the author clearly wants to make it interesting but when the overall story lacks it can't be helped. no wonder even after almost 200 chapters this novel is 300k views. just very very average and boring novel. author don't feel bad and delete the review cuz it's the truth. I hope I'm the future you can write some interesting novels if you can overcome your current capabilities.
honestly if you still want to read the novel while seeing this review well congratulations you gained nothing.
sadly disappointed he not only a let a moron lived not killed him, He let him tag along the mc
and don't take his words seriously you'll be super disappointed by how simple the do called 'brutal' it's term more loosely
he's obessesion of brains isn't really obsession just he wants the points and more like it's just normal diet for human to change food preferences and haven't even eaten a human brain in 8 CHAPTERS for being a brain eater who has an "obessesion".
surprisingly he hasn't killed anyone for a being who is obsessed with eating brain mostly human and not eating free meal. a real let down.
I don't know what to say, even thought the story has just started, the potentiel I see in it, is just great! does anyone like my house of horrors? then this will be up your ally.
I noticed that the author also knows how to write a chapter, there was no error as far as I noticed!
and finaly, I am sure that you will enjoy this, so support the author, and may he have good luck with the wsa!
Where this chapter
........where this chapter
Where this chapter
I wait. But none this chapter update.
Woyyyyyyyyyyyyuyuuuyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Where this chapter..
I wait for it.
Come one author when you upload you chapter.
Nice I like it so far and I hope you don’t quit writing.
This is my very first Eastern fantasy novel and I'm proud to say that this piece of art is a guide to understanding the development of Chinese Fantasy
the story is good, and the MC is hesitating or don't have clear goal
but that was before the last two chapters
hope don't get dropped before his next reincarnated or how the MC death !
overall the story has potential
Nice story line, the contents looks like a true life story of some African-black man. Wish to read more books from the writer. Please do you have hard copies, I will need some to my library and to donate to some primary schools
I only read up to chapter 11.
In my opinion this novel have potential, not bad.
But i don't like the story because author use 3rd person perspective, just try to count how many times author write "Evan" in a single chapter, personally i don't feel connected to the story because of this.
Also i feel like author need to use more punctuation, i notice author rarely use coma (,) sign on his story which made the paragraf feel chaotic.
I also don't like how author do chapter 1, the sacrifice part on chapter 1 is unnecessary for me, and its better if you put it in chapter 10.
In my opinion you made chapter 2 to chapter 9 as a flashback is a bad choice.
I mean why would you give readers an 8 chapter long flashback right from the start? its unnecessary, everyone can literally read chapter 1 and jump to chapter 10 immediately and can still understand the story.
Its a bad start in my opinion.
You should know that you need to make the story as interesting as possible on early chapter to make people stay and hyped for the next chapters, but here i am dropping on chapter 11 before even i know mc new power after the sacrifice.
I hope my review can help you to get better.
good luck author.
Stolen fan art from Date a Live as the cover? Not very cool
The hate is solely because I can not unlock any chapters for this novel, and I keep getting fast passes for it. I can't spend it since it only allows you to purchase all the chapters with coins, but I keep getting the fast passes anyway.