Please bring over the new chapters! I don't care if its in bulk every once in a while but reading on ww mobile is really annoying, you guys have a much slicker web design
You're typical web-novel. No defining moments, no defining characters, no intriguing plot. Straightforward, make random enemies, get strong, kill people and get bitches. Just read if you're bored and want to waste time.
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I was going to read it but it looks like author dropped it he didn't update for about 20 days that's sad
and author if you see this make it harem trust me
Have good writing and less typos. it was shocking as there were many bad tl going on.
Yandere andharem implented is quite fun and the plot is fresh. The story is funny and it was so fun reading this. 5stars.
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Story has a good premise, but the writing needs some work.
The transition (at least for the first good bit) is very rough, at times contradicting itself, or not making sense.
The pacing is wildly inconsistent as well, which makes following along a bit difficult.
Lots of unnecessary repetition and/or rewording of information, sometimes for entire chapters.
Main character is supposed to be very smart, but does some really stupid things, such as throwing away all his advantages (stealth, range, first attack) to rule-of-cool the boss instead.
If you can read though this (and ignore some bizarre world building choices) it looks like it could be fun.
Before I get into this I am not endorsed by the author this is my true opinion unless the endorsement fee is a good read then I am endorsed
Writing Quality- the writing quality of this author is impeccable which makes the story easy to understand and more smooth
Updating Stability- this is a great thing the author has as well, they release one chapter a day which is just enough to sate our curiosity about the story but still want to read more, this includes the cliffhangers
Story development- granted it could be a little slow it is one of the best I’ve seen on this app
Character design- I like the concept of the characters my only issue is the fact that we don’t really get to know the true feelings of the characters a lot, but it’s still great so it’s rated high
World design- I would’ve loved it if we could learn more about the world before the disappearance of mana but hey it’s still great
(Next update to review ch-100)
And again I am not payed and this is my honest opinion
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One of the better trial reads out there.
Seems interesting, but the author describes the women way too much. We get it they are beautiful .....
Great read
So glad to have gotten the chance to complete it.