The mc is too linear. They made him stingy and that is his only defining trait, after 150 chp he still has no character development, and is just a douche. He doesn’t value any relationship at all and treats his own companions and people in general horribly. 150+ chapters and little story not world development. No idea on the hierarchy structure/world background and nothing on cultivation ranks.
I don't think my review will stay here long as this author most likely deletes reviews based on comments, quality, and boosted ratings...
Anyways I think the novel had a really good start, however it quickly devolves into cliche plots, forced and flat relations, and dumb decisions. Since C5ish the novel went downhill. The grammar is good however the story quality has a noticable drop. I ended up dropping this novel at C19 due to that. It sort of felt like the author tried to force cliche and/or cringe things as an original which did not work... Overall, author I think you need to focus on developing your story flow/plot and characters.
Lastly I love the cover, plus the updates look daily, though I can only guess since on phone so cant see history.
Since the other guy gave 1 star for no reason on a quite nice novel in my opinion I shall give 5 stars too. .........................................
This is one of the best novels I've experienced till now.! The story develops so much interest of the reader and every part captivates you. Love to see this kind of work.♥️
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I keep giving you 5 star.
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Awful novel ...Logic is thrown out the window like MC bought close combat weapons even tho he only uses a sword ...Bomb suit apparently cheap and even tho bomb suits are heavy weight suits he can move without any difficulty ?Ight im out of here MDAAV is so much better
That was a cliff hanger . author, you owe me another volume . it was good and refreshing for a change. i enjoyed it. will recommend for others too. the only question is what will happen to ethan. and may god bless moon goddess . lmao. my best wishes .
Very good pleas keep writing.
Over all the story is amazing. The author could definitely improve on world development, but the story line and character development is on point. A great book so would definitely recommend.
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The most interesting fact is that you have taken the present world pandemic as a backdrop and woven a plot around your story. Not an innovation, but all the persons associated with the medical profession etc have made such a background for their story.I just read your first chapter and it is quite long perhaps equivalent to an ordinary book which would cover this material in 4-5 chapters.As far as the writing quality goes, I do not see any fault except for the long chapters and long paragraphs. Your command over the English language is good. However, if you want all persons to read your book, please use less bombastic words. Simple English will go a long way to get you readers from across the globe. Stability of updates is there. The story is developing nicely. The character design is good. World background is excellent.I am looking forward to continue reading your book. and it will remain in my library.All the best,Author!