I like the novel and just hopes it doesn't get dropped ............................................................................................................................................................................................................
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To The Author,Kindly continue the novelMake the MC an Anti-Hero with Full Solid Black Suit with best material with lots of best defense enchanments, A Master of All Things in everthing beyond any level we can imagine - Magic( Rune, Wizardry, Sorcery, etc.,) Martial Art( Chi, Cultivator and varies combat Arts)Science(Inventor, Scientist, Engineer,Medicine and Doctor etc.,) and many more things to Mastery.Make him the best in intellect(Science) and Combat Arts In level beyond the level even Bruce Wayne(BATMAN) can't imagine.Make Mutants into Meta-Humans.Also, Keep the Characters from Both Western and Eastern Heroes from Comics and already known characters.Hope to see these soon!2. Since your fanfic is mostly like the Mix of MCU and EARTH 616 - Make to MC to go back in the past in The Library Of Calegastro learn all the Magic there copy all those books distribute to Kamar Taj and copy for himself as well make him go to Mimir and Yggdrasil to gain more about Runes and Knowledge of Various ARTS(Magic, Combat, Tech-Magic or Etc., just make it up also make him do the works to influence people on Earth to save nature through Tech-Magic to save Earth Environment To Make the Qi, Ki, Chi , Mana Richer on Earth than any other place in the whole Multiverse) of the whole Universe or Multiverse.Make him a Grand-Master to teach all people and future heroes in Avengers Academy(Combining all Kamar Taj, Kun Lun and other hidden academy/Sects) Combat Arts and Magic Arts - ( Manupulation and uses of Chi, Ki , Qi and Mana into various Arts ) especially on Earth as his base operation.Also make him transport Asgard on Earth as a part of the planet.But before he do so make him change Earth into full pollution free planet in Rich nature energy( Combine with Ki, Chi, Mana, Cosmic Energy).*Bring Yao(Ancient One) Soul back from Dark Dimension also make her immortal and ageless, oly making her stronger over time.[Last, just a small suggestion make MC and Yao(Ancient One) fall in love and Married.]Thanks!- Reader.
amazing story and characters, I'm actually impressed that you were able to make this good of a novel but also make so many chapters?????????????????????????????
Possibly the best release for months now.But I was expecting the MC to be a bit smarter than he is right now ??? But yeah.... beggars can't be choosersI hope this gets selected though.I can work with the slightly dumb MC + Slightly Weak Cheat :)
This novel is quite boring. Especially if you have read similar eastern fantasy novels. Too much explanation no suspense(no cliffhangers) or trill. Nothing exciting happens in the first 15 chapters so I dropped it. On to the next one.
Great... Great... Great... Great... Great... ????????????????????????????????I love this book... ?????????
First, the very first thing you said about you no being an author or dreamt of beibh an author in the very beginning, caught my attention. I love honesty and how you opened up to we readers about everything, I loved it. I'll even say, even if you don't have a proofreader or editor like you said, your writing supercedes those who are authors in fact. I'm giving this review from my heart and I'll scream a million times that I love this book. This is actually a book I'd recommend to those who love sci-fi, thriller or the rest. It's a book I'd recommend to all Webnovel readers. Sometimes, I wish it was a movie itself. I'm beyond words to explain how to tell you how much I love this book, you're just too good and the characters and everything well placed. You even dedicated a chapter to me?? and that motivated me to write this review now. I don't know who might cross across this, but if you do, plz do give this book a big support and other books you love. It's not easy being an author.Thank you Favy for the wonderful Zombies Territory. I'm looking forward to it.Also, don't mind me if this is how I gave the review. I just don't know the right words to say how much I love this books. And once again, thank you for your honesty and for opening up to all of us. I just wish some readers won't downgrade the book from the very first chapter. Love you more my Author ?
this is a good novel so far yhe only problem is the start it needs to be either re-writen or edited because spelling and whatnot is not done well until a few chapters in when spelling mistakes disappear for the most part
The main character is not ruthless. He's a scum who kills and tortures innocent people. He stirred up the country, and then ordered the execution of half the population JUST LIKE that! Too proud, too stupid. Underline, STUPID! He does not think through the steps in advance, for which he gets in the balls. And then the degenerate gets angry and destroys the street of homeless people. Also, the author did not really understand the capitalist system and says that his" great " country, the United States, is at the peak of its power. Fucking it is not at the peak of power, capitalism leads to the degradation of the population and self-destruction of the country ©Karl Marx. One of the" comrades " of the main character said that the USA was built on bones, blood and innocent deaths, said that there is no OTHER WAY! * 10 seconds later* I need world peace!!! But in the USSR, people did not cut each other's throats and lived more than perfectly. ###Yes, I know that under the USSR there was socialism. I know it's banned in the United States, but who's stopping you FROM just READING?### Pretends to be cool, constantly bragging, but in fact is only an empty place.
Another novel without soul and with the same design as the others ... I find it boring and without real interest can't compare to good novel like I am really superstar and others...
I liked it at like 1-5 chapters but when i cam to fighting and smart desicions MC fucking do some stupid things,is that even smart? And wtf is with this rating? 4.4 stars? And 400+ raters? I call bull****!!!!