It's a very interesting read for sure. I would totally recommend this to anyone. The author has done a great job at writing the story and though the prose could use some editing, the overall plot and characters are amazing.
after reading the first two chapters I have to say im not sure how to take in this work. It has good structure in terms of writing, but for me the story is flat. The characters don't feel original. I feel like i read a writer's insert food wars fanfic. However I do realize that the story is in its early stages so there is a much larger room to flesh out the world and character.
bro baited me with the cover
anyway this novel is pretty good tje translation is not that bad its just a little confusing sometimes
by reading this novel, i learn more how to convey or tell the world building. Your story telling really good. I love them overall, can't wait to see the update! good luck author!!
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Have read/am reading dukes other novels and they are all amazing but even only being 7 chapters in I think this one stands above them all in quality, potential and is quite different from the other ones
All in all, a solid novel.There aren’t too many chapters so I can make a concrete review. Howver, from what I’ve read so far (30 chaps or so) I would say that it’s quite solid.The concept is fun, the dialogues are nice, and the world background is also slowly starting to take shape.That said, there are a couple of things that could improved.Firstly, not sure if it was just me, but at some point you used an emoji, and my laptop couldn’t read it, so I was confused for a bit. Could be just me, and it wasn’t really a big problem. The pacing is fine since the world is starting to take shape, so no problem there. Character is fine, but you what should be worked on more are side characters.They do feel alive, but it can be slightly improved. Just give them more unique quirks, and some motivation and goals to which they aspire to achieve.Anyhow, I really do like the story. Keep up the good work.
What a nice story! I cannot wait for the author to update the novel.????????????????????????????????????
Hope it updates constantly so that we will have more material for the anime. Great characters. So many lore and development.great plot twists and i just love seeing ainz/momonga display more and more of his power.
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this is a very well written story. never thought a sword could be such a cool mc and just how many forms does he have ?by the end of the story I wouldn't be shocked to see around 50 froms.