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Its pretty good, the grammars good, the characters are good but can be totally improved, although I know the characters are like that because this is like a fast overview, so its okay. The writing style is okay and can be improved. Overall it's a pretty good story. It's not confusing at least so that's a plus ?
alright so far so good, the mc doesn't seem like a weakling like the MC of Immortal in a reverse world or something, anyway for people who haven't read it yet I wouldn't say it's Ground Breaking but it is Decent...for how long will it stay like that is the question tho.
Oh and don't bother about those low reviews it's clear there just dissatisfied that the mc is not the one being conquered, but I mean c'mon what did you expect?
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I absolutely loved this book. Amazing story with such a good writing. I loved how i could visualize the scenes as if I was sucked into the book and watching everything happen before my eyes. Great job!
cool story... very interesting to read. passion for author. waiting for the next story. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Wow, I don’t think I’ve ever read a novel that has such little idea about what it wants to do and be, and what the basic laws of how the world should function are, just for example it almost immediatly says if you die in the game you cant revive thats your one chance but like 2 chapters later you can revive just you have to restart, If your trashy like me youll probably still somewhat enjoy it but man are the inconsistencies annoying.
I loved the story , in my opinion the author drew a very beautiful picture with his words . there were few errors here and there but i am fine with it , cause i know it is difficult to write . this book is definitely worth reading. good luck author.
Title: 修仙从沙漠开始
Author：中天紫薇大帝
Status: completed (838 chapters +7 extras).....................................................................
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Great book, Is a joy to read,one best books i have read one this site just hopes it stay free so every can injoy the this master piece of a book
The core story progression point in this novel is flawed.
Lorne wows the king and his attendant with his analyses of current events in the world, despite the fact that it is impossible for him to know anything. The tavern he owns has no customers, as the author points out, while Lorne does not go out, or at least, it isn’t stated or even hinted. Lorne has no personality, heck, we aren’t even given a description of his physical features, ambitions or background.
The explanations feel rushed, and aren’t substantial in any way.
TL;DR this is a miss.
Amazing!!❤️ I've read the starting and I can't wait to read what's next.
The characters and everything is so beautiful designed and the idea is so fantastic! You've done a really good job. Keep it up!