I've been stuck on this book's early chapters for a quite long time already. And i think now is the time for us to part ways.The pros :- The mc's backstory is unknown yet he is likeable and understandable on a certain level.- The world is original.- Some might like the rather slow pace .- The mc's reaction to his reincarnation is really realistic .- A promising plot slowly unravels .- The author 's writing quality is above average( the style is not very eye-catching but it manages to keep you intrigued and there aren't many mistakes ( if any) ).- I don't know the chapters' lenght , but i can tell it must be longer than your average 1000 words on webnovel.The cons : - The characters are bland.The Mc is likeable yet somehow , he is uninteresting enough. If i'm being honest , i simply don't care enough about him , even though i know him( i've read 23 chapters already).I think this comes from two facts :First , the Mc doesn't really have any flaw he should work on( egoism , dishonesty...).Him being insecure makes me empathize with him but that's all. I do not feel really tied to him , nor does he seems realistic , since he has no bad side.And second , the mc's personality is melancholic and cold.Contrary to what people think , writing about a cold mc is really difficult , since it's hard to make him engaging. But not only did the author make him cold , he/she also used an omniscient pov , which further distances readers from the Mc. If only he had funny thoughts despite having a cold demeanor, it would have still been fine.But as i said earlier , he is melancholic. So don't expect rejoicing thoughts from him.On another point , i also don't really like how the Mc acted( in the 23rd chapter ) as though Killing was forced upon him. Emir had a choice. He could have let the hitmen go. So i don't understand why he lamented and acted as if it was forced upon him. If he acts in a certain way , he has to uphold his responsabilities. This all whinning time discredited him highly and it was even the final push for me to definetely stop reading this book.All in all , he is not irritating nor engaging. He is fine and just fine.Now for the side characters...They are forgetable( even the Mc's mother and his sister). - The pace is slow.As i said above , the pace is rather slow. And this together with the characters makes the story feels dragging.- I don't really like the book's general vibe .The book's ambiance is the reflection of the Mc : cold and melancholic. It doesn’t change one bit , and this ends up making the whole reading experience underwhelming.Finally , I pray for your improvement author and hope that my honest review does help you.
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A new reader here, recommended by my friend. interesting story. But the newest chapter was uploaded one year ago!!! Did you forget your password? Anyway can't wait to read the new chapter.
thought this would be amazing, yet I missed it was harem... yay... doesn't writers realize you can have a girl, and break up with before finding a new one? instead of cheating on her, and then they all just be cool with it (as I see it). who convinced all those writers that the first girl HAS to be the one he ends up with, in monogamistic relationships? and if not, that it MUST be harem?
This is literally a copy/pasted version of game of thrones... Why are so many idiots trying to post stolen works on this site? Seriously, its a published and has a copy-right.
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It's me the author. Looks how pathetic I'm write the review to myself. Well I just to make the review, so problaly someone can read it. You know probably my chance story to show up on your screen become bigger.By Author..
Winter_Iris.Your writing always captivate me.Your writing skills and your ability to draw the readers' attention and capture their hearts is incredible.You are a great writer. You get better each time you write a new novel. Your stories , whether light or dark fascinate me.You have a vivid imagination which you pour into your writing.Your skills amaze me.?I have read two chapters and I know that I am going to love this novel. This is just amazing.Amazing, amazing work!I'm so proud of you.Five stars! ? ? ? ??Keep writing.Always cheering for you.?
Come check it out and you would love to binge read. Hopefully the author is well versed with the genre. Looking forward to the further development.
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I don't understand the point of making him a transmigrated hero, who before transmitting fully had to spend hundreds of thousands of years observing the world, if your going to make his past knowledge completely useless. He has proven to be unreliable and useless when it came to any type of information throughout the entirety of the chapters I read.The main character, having past acclamations as being a world observing hundreds of thousands year old entity, as well as an accomplished hero, is written in a way that makes him feel ordinary and not special in any regards. The story is written in such a way that it brings no emotions from the reader. I can't exactly pin point the exact reasons why, but I have managed to get a basic generalization an this is. First, the bland descriptions of actions,places, and things. Serves to make the story take a very one note plot.Secondly, the lack of character descriptions when it comes to the characters emotions and actions makes the story even more monotonous. Couple this reason with the first then you've got a very bland story that doesn't manifest any good emotions when reading it. Oh and I read the first 60 chapters not just 15 like it says.
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