Hello I have noticed your novel, I read it and it was pretty fun, it makes me happy that my novel inspired someone to write their own story, keep going, may Kireina-sama bless your writing
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I recommend reading it as there is no racism and very little nationalism involved at the start of the story and since the story is also very fluid you should love it if you are a dragon fan OwO
okay i gotta say, this is one of my favorite novels ever. I'm up to date at chap 258, and it's been super refreshing to read a novel like this. I've always been a fan of the process of comprehending universal laws/daos and the mysticism that comes with it and this has plenty of that later on. Origin-tan keeps the novel fresh, and there aren't tons of cliques throughout the novel. the mc end up in a relationship later on, and at least so far, they haven't used the worst clique ever (at least in my book) which is the main heroine being placed in a coma or kidnapped away from mc where he has to get super strong to meet her again. the character development makes the characters feel like living breathing people, and if you have some time and coins i would 200% recommend you taking time to read this.also, plz gift stones and coins, so we can see the end of this story eventually. it would be really sad if this novel gets dropped. Origin-tan we love you, and keep up the hard work!!! おつかれ さま でした!
Good writing, good characters ,good grammar ,good plot good description I live this novel, I love it so much, I highly recommend it ,good job Author excellent work I love this ? ????
Shameless author here...So, I've worked really hard to put this story together and it's taken me a long while so I hope anyone reading this enjoys it.I'm pretty confident in my english, so it should be easy to understand what I'm writing.I do tend to make things move slowly, it's just my writing style, but I'm sure that if you bear with it you'll be happy when we reach the important parts of the story.I don't want to give you any of my opinions about the story here because that's up to you to decide...I'd appreciate any feedback you can give me.Thanks so much for reading this I hope you give my work a chance, it will really mean the world to me... and take care of yourselves-S
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great this story is, you will simply be engrossed in it right away, the synopsis caught my attention. Been following this authors work Black ghoul and later on I saw this n added it to my library and I don't regret it its simply awesome. author please update more I want to know what happens to the biogenetics
Here we go. I’m at around chapter 85. Loved how it started, author covered the basics, why the MC knows this and that,etc. I love the gaming elements novels, and the mystery with the character that dies with a couple of great items but not breaking balance completely is done well.
Now unfortunately it gets worse. The MC is introduced as a veteran gamer of various VR games, with at least some training in martial arts. Then as the game keeps goings he forgets more and more of this gaming knowledge (note, im ok with him not being an expert or godly reflexes,etc, but not evolving as fast as you can inspect, making noob mistakes and forgetting basic gaming elements… I hate when you dumb an MC).
We add to that a helper, a guide in the form of a fairy. I like that, even when she does not tell you everything, but only if the reason is because she can’t (rules). Defenetly not because of her ego, snappy remarks, rudeness, sense of superiority, etc. And the MC reactions being to act timidly and senseless.
I also did not like him keeping a guy who gets into trouble to hide under you after throwing the rock. Really? That’s the companion he wants to stick with?
Finally, I am going after starting a quest where he knows he is being manipulated, knows a solution (kill him or blackmail him back, or at least tell the truth about the quest) and still does nothing.
Once this issues are solved the novel can be quite good. Good idea, good background, good writing and stable updates. But the before mentioned just makes it more unbereable the more you read.
Keep it up author, it’s good work, but try to improve on the mentioned.
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The story had an interesting premise that I was drawn to but after the first 40 chapters, it delved into utter boredom. The female Mc is so annoying gosh. The mc for all the hype of how bad he is I never really get to see him be ruthless and kill. He leaves ppl alive. I kind of understand sparing the female Mc but why the guy who reported him. I tried to continue after those chapters but I can't subject myself to that torture. All in all, it was an ok read up to 40.