Very very very very very very very good. Idk just haven’t seen many like it. Plot was interesting, but it transitions a bit slow. I hate waiting weeks
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My honest opinion and what I noticed, the story has minimal errors in terms of writing, it doesn't get in the way of reading, the release of a week can bother some, but due to the quality of the story, it's not possible to remove the merit just because of the capitols delay (I prefer quality over quantity). The narrative isn't bad, it's good. And about the story, volume 1 was pretty standard, nothing special that I remember, but volume 2, I thought it was very good, it was wonderful. But as everything that goes up will also have to come down, we arrived at volume 3 which is horrible and dark, not because of the writing but the course that the story took, and instead of the author changing the course he continued, if you don't believe me can you read the comments on the chapters of the third volume, do you want the reasons? The protagonist's behavior becomes irrational and a new character is as useful as Sakura.
People can come and say that volume 3 is to develop the character, yes, but you don't develop a character by irritating your reader, quite the opposite, you have to develop it by making your reader feel empathy for the protagonist and not anger. But it's no use saying that the protagonist had his reasons, the reasons are not clear for several capitolos making their attitudes irrational, doing things that normal people wouldn't do.
A spectacular novel that forces the MC to use his brain to survive through incredible plans, in addition to very good narration and story progression, in addition to very good Mc and secondary characters. Simply incredible, five stars.
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Author Note: All chapters from the first 2 volumes have been fixed, edited and changed to 3rd person. So if you've read it before and want to give it another chance, you might enjoy it more. ^-^
Author's Review:
-Young boy reincarnated into a new world (Immaturity + Inexperience and a rather hateable person can be present at first) But as the story progresses, so does he.
Growth is slow but In my opinion it's worth the wait.
Writing Quality I always try to make it as good as possible. Updates have been rather shaky lately but normally 2 chapters / day. Story develops rather strangely, it flows on it's own, nothing which is written is planned.
Character Design: Spiky White and Black Hair / Green eyes Young man. A rather unusual look.
World Background: Fantasy world, split and divided into 6 continent. Underworld and Heaven exist but have yet to be mentioned. <- This will play a rather big part on the story, sorry for the spoiler.
For those who ask about Harem, all I'll say is I'm not a fan of Harem myself, but once again, if that's what the MC wants and he knows how to get it, he might. (Harem is uncertain)
Hope you enjoyed reading this, Sorry for the long length. The book starts off light but if you can't handle a little tragedy and darkness then i won't say it's your cup of tea.
Either way, ignore this review and give it a try yourself, you might or might not like it. That's all from this shameless author. I have to get back to work.[img=recommend]
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Great story, great character, great development,i can't wait for update. .
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I love BL with modern world especially school life. I am really looking forward to this novel. I already love the main character. Best of luck to you!!!!!!!
many well wishes for the author because he brought us such a great story. the opening chapter was amazing. I like how you have written the story but it needs more world building. hope you will improve more.
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