bro it is awesome. Badass, Hot Headed, Revenge lover MC
This is the author here. I came here to leave a shameless review on my own book and to also ask for guidance from all of you.I am trying to write a pretty decent book and because of the time I spent away from writing and reading, I am sure I made some glaring errors.please comment on the book, telling me where I went wrong and what I can do to make it better.
Great, and well written ???, Kudos to the writer???
Really great start. Has Potential ?.
Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?
Seems good so far. Like the premise cant say much more.
This story suffers from the same problem a lot of bad beast taming novels suffer from... the MC gets OP too quickly, its only chapter 20 and this motherfucker has 800 in all his stats, and i not even get me started with the snake, first of all you NEVER associate a pet with a girlfriend... its fucking disgusting, second the snake also gets super strong super fast, she cant turn into a 10 meters tall snake (tall not long) and the MC didn't even do the "generical noob tournament" yet.As a rule of thumb i can't trust authors that explicitly throw up high numbers (1000+) in the beginning of a novel, because they get lost in the power scale in the middle and throw the novel in the trash at the end.
This is a really good story. I love it. I can’t wait for more chapters to be released. Anxiously waiting.
A captivating read . Can't wait to see more character development and a gripping plot. I'm already beyond hooked from start to finish. Highly recommend!
The premise is actually interesting. However, I am quite bothered by the storytelling style, where some sentences and punctuation could have been improved to make it more comfortable for the reader.
Hi guys, thank you for coming. It makes me excited. My book is far from perfect. But I hope you like it and encourage me to improve. Thank you.
While this book already exists on this platform. The preexisting one hasnt been updated in over 2 weeks and might i add your translation was absolutely beautiful.