SpiritImmortalz60
Can't wait to read it!!!! I am first!????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Kok praising novel with useless tips on how to pick up girls. Very low effort novel with zero imagination. MC does not deserve his OP skills at all.
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Holy. This is a story about an absolute idiot. He fully believes serving 3 years in maximum security prison, and being framed as a terrorist by his leadership is all part of his grand mission. To his utter surprise after 3 years half his family is dead, his name is tarnished and his little sister is about to trafficked into a prostitution ring. Even still, he's apparently the 'invincible lord' who is the height of personal power and supreme intelligence in the world. What kind of plot is this? What kind of protagonist is this?
This has a lot of potential to become an amazing story. The few chapters I read already had me excited to read ------------------------------_------------
I love the fact that the MC is not an arrogant A..Hole like in other stories.It is quite refreshing to read about a down to earth mc.I especially liked the part where he was not bothered about not being a Ying Yang Master. Many other MCs tend to go angsty and broody in such situations.Author and Translation Team, keep up the excellent work!
The rhythm of the novel is slow but that’s a slice of life novel, so it’s supposed to be that way.The author utilize the characters very well.And it’s noticeable as the chapters go on that the novel becomes better and better.
This is a novel translated by MTL novel , it has up to 858 chps, but it's in hiatus there also . Of course it's not as good as translated by humans as it is by machine, although compared to other machine translation it is much better, there are some passages that are hard to understand as all machine translations mtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtlmtl
Well I finally started reading your story. I thought it was okay...??? I mean I havn't finished it yet but I know almost everything that would have happened since I already read most of it helping you write it out... Anyways I got a webnovel account since you could use the help, and because I also wanna get some more books to read.
Pretty good, but... you're not consistent. Your description of the main character differs from the psychological portrait of a typical special unit soldier.I recommend some good literature first.
Good read so far, author update regularly pls
This book has been left in my library for quite some time still unfinished. Coz I'm really having a hard time with the dragon ways. Though with trigger warning, I cannot open my mind to harem ways, and her sharing with his brothers was my ultimate disappointment.
