This book is awesome! I’m mad I just now found it.
Halo, para penulis~Lomba menulis bertema akan diadakan sekali tiap dua minggu. Akan ada tema baru untuk setiap lomba yang baru! Yuk, mulai dari memilih tema yang kamu senangi, menulis itu nggak sesusah yang kamu pikirkan kok!
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First, the very first thing you said about you no being an author or dreamt of beibh an author in the very beginning, caught my attention. I love honesty and how you opened up to we readers about everything, I loved it. I'll even say, even if you don't have a proofreader or editor like you said, your writing supercedes those who are authors in fact. I'm giving this review from my heart and I'll scream a million times that I love this book. This is actually a book I'd recommend to those who love sci-fi, thriller or the rest. It's a book I'd recommend to all Webnovel readers. Sometimes, I wish it was a movie itself. I'm beyond words to explain how to tell you how much I love this book, you're just too good and the characters and everything well placed. You even dedicated a chapter to me?? and that motivated me to write this review now. I don't know who might cross across this, but if you do, plz do give this book a big support and other books you love. It's not easy being an author.Thank you Favy for the wonderful Zombies Territory. I'm looking forward to it.Also, don't mind me if this is how I gave the review. I just don't know the right words to say how much I love this books. And once again, thank you for your honesty and for opening up to all of us. I just wish some readers won't downgrade the book from the very first chapter. Love you more my Author ?
I added the novel in my library! It was an amazing read and very engaging! Unfortuantely, I cannot read them all at one go, but I plan to continue where I had left from the story. I really like the man's actions, dialogue, and personality. It's very unique and mysterious; almost too mysterious but transparent that anyone can relate to. The girl that he met also has a personality with her. Overall, 10/10 descriptions for the characters.The only things that I like to point out are the repeatative words. Although they aren't many that I can hinder readers to their journey, it would be best if the words are unique than its simplest form. One example is the words 'said' , murmured, and others! it will make the story even more interesting that what it is right now!That's all I observed for now! I really like where the story is going! Kudos for the story and the author.
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wish this gets picked . .
Ill be the first to explain I guess. The book is more of a scholarly article on society, at least the first and only chapter is. It talks of relationships between competitors and team members on a deep scale often using excerpts from literary giants such as Homer and The Art of war to put forward its points. It is fascinating to read if you are interested in the topic or scholarly articles. The writing quality is very good and even satisfying to a degree. There however is no story, no characters, no world, nothing, zilch. So the rating I can give this book currently is only so much. If a story is produced with writing quality at the level of the first chapter and the other categories can be up to par then this book might even become famous. Keep it up author.One last point, the first chapter is extremely long. This is not a result of the content being large but the author has copy pasted the same article over and over again for a reason which I cannot guess.
Good Job....Nice storyline...Update more frequently author...----Also a quick suggestion:in your inkstone page, you could actually set up a new cover page for your book
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this novel is probably one of the most original thought i have ever come upon with regards to themes on systems.. unique and wonderdully written you will never be bored with the way the author narrates the story of wang wei. kudos to you dear author and keep writing!
Excellent beginning - interesting worldbuilding, immediate ten.sio.n, a race against time! A VR game used to invade other countries. Do I hear echoes of Ender's Game? I'd like to hear how a VR game invasion managed to make it into RL.The MC is racing to get strong enough to beat an invasion of VR players on his country. But then, things get more complicated, and matters appear that are greater than the fate of a single country or a single person.This novel has layered mysteries, and the MC traveling back in time to participate in a VR game that destroyed countries is just the beginning. I read the brain journey thing and went ah, is this going to be like Knowhere? Unfortunately it wasn't and I stopped reading. I wrote this review instead, haha!As for the MC, Ibrahim is the determined sort of person. He's definitely the kind hero type, not a trash MC. There's not a lot of character development at first; it is the plot that keeps the story moving forward in the first several volumes. Minor problems in formatting - capitalization and punctuation mostly. Could be ignored, and it gets better, but there's a lot in the beginning.Still, I definitely recommend this novel. Great read!