KuruptsA4i
Really good so far, just hope it's not dropped when the contest is over. Seems to happen a lot these days. If the quality stays up I would even be fine with once a week updates.
Firstly I have to mention that this is a great novel with an intresting concept. The mc is not cliche and has a real personality and furthermore he is not flawless.
He is an introvert but in reality he wants to socialise with others.
_Writing Quality_
The writing quality is pretty good and there are very few mistakes (I am not an englsih native speaker so you probably will find more than I though).
_Stability of Updating_
The author posts a day, but sometimes he misses a day but makes up for it in the later days.
_Story Developpment_
It has to be said that this is a slow story but as soon as he
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enters the new world the progress is normal.
It is clear that the author has an idea for the plot and the story follows a clear "path"
_Character Design_
The characters are all interesting and have their own flaws.
Even though you can guess the personality of a character, there are some plot twists which seem understandebal but unexpected.
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Additionally you can see how the MC fights his asocial personality and socalises more and more
-World Backround_
The world has a clear structure and there is nothing that happens, that seems totally random. The wolrd is furthermore intresting and you want to know more abou it.
All in all it is a fun read and you should give it a try.
[At this point the story reached 73 chapters so far and things can change and this review would be inaccurate]
I have to remind you that this is my first review so please do not blame me to much if you dont like it
Welllll it is very interesting novel and it is inspiring me to write my own novel with the same genres well not that i am a professional. Keep the hard work
The plot is interesting and it seems like the story is getting my attention though i want more improvement in a relationship with the leads i suggest reading male lead ebooks are awesome
Excellent story, but the translator’s inconsistencies make the book almost unbearable in the first 39 chapters. It gets better afterward, but any time gaming terms or quantities are mentioned you should ignore the whole thing because there’s a mistake somewhere.
Great story! A game type genre and exciting because I like the mystery how the main character end up on this game. Cant wait for more chapter
First of all excuse me if there are mistakes english is not my native language. What I can say about this story is that for now it is well written, the characters and the plot is well constructed. The fights are well described without being too surrealist so I like that. For finished I hope that the author continues like that both for the frequency of these updates and for the quality of its plot.
As the one how wrote this Web novel I admit that it has flaws but I don't think it matters the story is entertaining and that's what matters the most.
I don't think any one is here to read about some deep filosofical ideas and principles.
English isn't my first language so please excuse the horrible speling.
Give it a try and you'll see if it's something for you or not.
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high school of the dead fan fic, not an official fan fic btw, but a copy from the original with no source. in fact all of the books under the author are pirated books.
The real story begins after chapter 70, Before that is boring and unnecessary rubbish that is not worth reading and can be summarized in one sentence "Double class are best and you can learn many spells.!!"
