Alright,Alright let's see where this end,I'm already getting fired up??
WARNING!!! MC is no right in head please be prepare to felt pain on your stomach because laughing so hard afte witnessing MC "Perfect" level "Annoying" skill. Also you shouldnt read this novel in public place if you dont want people to queston your sanity because LOL yourself
I enjoyed reading your chapters. It has so much potential. The plot of the story was so interesting and engaging.
Pls keep writing and Do not stop bringing interesting story to your audience.
Well-written and entertaining. I don’t often comme across a novel I like but when I do.... oh, boy. I’ve been reading it non-stop and can only recommend it.
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From just the first 5 chapters, the main character, although not chinnese, gives off Chinnese MC vibes. Also, he is very bratty and has super low IQ. Sigh... what was I expecting...
Heyo crazy cronie here,
review on 29/03/2021 @chap27 (released chap till date: 27)
review divided in:
Short review
Long review
IMO
Ratings
Conclusion
Warning (includes spoilers)
short review:
Gives you 'Accept disciples and become stronger' and 'History's no one founder' vibes.
AND LET ME SAY IT ONCE AGAIN, THE REVIEW IS BASED ON JUST 30 CHAPS!
long review:
pros:
1) Even though the story isn't original, this is still a fresh read since this ain't the type of plotline WN authors generally pick coz it's a lot more difficult.
2) A light hearted novel with almost zero tension. (This can both be a pro or a con depending on readers. To me a pro.)
3) MC is smart unlike other novels where the main trait of the mc is idiocy. No plot armour saving MC's ass, mc knows to hide, to run.... Atleast for now that's the casd
4) I love the pacing of this novel. Literally the events are not postponed forever and takes place when you need them.
5) Side chara gets the deserved attention. Even though still less than 30 chaps I know the author is giving them the screen time required.
6) Author interacts with the readers... Listens to their ideas, opinions and advices and uses them, a big plus compared to those who just take many criticisms and advices comments as malice....
7) Maybe because it is new but the updates are stable.. and it is even 10 chaps a week!! Something which I love!!
cons:
1) [NOT REALLY A CONS] Too much info? Author sometimes give more than info dump required. (I cut my entertainment points coz of that.)
2) A light hearted novel with almost zero tension as said above. (This can both be a pro or a con depending on readers. To me a pro since I was searching something like this.)
3) [NOT REALLY A CONS] Nothing can be said clearly about world. We don't exactly know where the plot is heading... But then again WE ARE JUST 30 CHAPS IN!!
4) MC doesn't have really have any ambition. Like
*SPOILER*
he just gets a disciple coz the system said so... The system didn't threaten him and neither it was shown that mc wanted to become really strong!!
That maybe coz it's just 30 chaps and maybe revealed in the future.
5) [NOT REALLY A CONS] Easy to understand writing with little bit of typo errors and some grammatical mistakes which are negligible.
IMO:
- A little less info dump would be better...
- A little ambitious MC would be a big plus for this novel, like creating your own clan/group/organisation... Just a lil bit of hint would be fine ... Even something like wanting to live a carefree life that's why making your disciples strong is also okay
As long as my opinions doesn't spoil the plot
RATINGS:
writing: 8/10 (con-5)
update: 9/10 (pro-7)
plot: 8/10 (pro-1&2, con-1&3)
characters: 8.5/10 (pro-3&5, con-4)
pacing: 8.5/10 (pro-4)
dialogues: 8/10 (pro-5)
entertainment: 8.5/10
OVERALL: 4.2/5
Conclusion:
This novel has excellent potential! I am just worried like many other WN authors, he doesn't stop updating... I am seriously waiting for more updates:).
Thanks for the chapters!
If possible pin this review @PurpleSpring bruh!
Next review after chap 100
WARNING:
*SPOILER (not exactly)*
- MC till now seems to be neutral. Neither hero, nor villain... Should have been anti hero but even that isn't mentioned...
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Incredibly great concept of idea
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Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
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I can't give the best review since there are only a few chapters, but so far, I love this story. I saw a few grammatical mistakes so that's good. I like the characters however I hope they can be a bit more fleshed out through the story. I can't say much about the world background since it's not fully explained. However, this is a great story and I can't wait for more!
I love your writing, it is very interesting, captivating and entertaining