love the characters and also the story. That was gonna be amazing when i Saw the novel. I really hope that this novel can motivate the others to make it too.
Chapter 3 and I can't help but love the story already.
Because the author knows something most writers don't.
How to give the protagonist goals he wants to achieve and stakes that make it challenging.
Over all 4.5 /5
The story line is well written and it develops accordingly. Although it's a little bit early.
The grammarbis fair enough.
The character's are fine.
The world background is well designed.
And the update rate is excellent so far.
Author I only have one question, and that is if the MC will have a romantic interest or not?
great novel so far. I hope the author doesn't change his way of writing or place characters recklessly. All in all, a beautiful novel that I will follow.
Amazing start, I highly recommend reading this, it's only 3 chapters tho this will be good, I wish the Author would post more other than that nothing is wrong with the story but it's too early to judge!!
Nice story development for a book about mafia. Not too much gooey romance as it should be for a mafia. I'll be waiting for ore updates.
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The narrative strength of the story lies in its exploration of self-discovery and the search for one’s purpose, themes that resonate with a wide audience. Aries’ journey is both external and internal, combining the excitement of unraveling mysteries with the profound journey of understanding oneself and finding one’s place in the world.
This is my second review and I´ve currently released about 100 chapters before I even realized it.
Time passed so fast, I want to clarify a few things that might have annoyed some readers or caused them to cringe :3
The following list might also help new readers to decide whether to read the story or not.
1. My native language is not English and unfortunately, my grammar and vocabulary are not perfect [Sorry for that]
It might happen that the chapters from 1-60~ have some minor plot-holes/slightly weird character development and the reason for this is quite simple.
I started to write this novel without any prior writing experience and in a foreign language at that.
If you can´t bear to read a few grammar mistakes and minor overall mistakes it will be quite difficult for you to binge read or follow me on my journey.
2. There were some readers that couldn´t help but lament about the MC´s cringe-worthy behavior because he is emotional…
Jason is a youth, barely 14 years old, and had to endure a tuff past… character development shouldn´t be over in a single chapter, right?
Furthermore, due to his young age, he might act childish sometimes, even though he is used to behave like he already matured.
3. I’m sure that the MC will not have a Harem, but most likely a future romance sub-plot.
4. My Novel´s name is [God´s Eyes] but in the end, there are also other aspects, helping him to grow stronger.
5. The world our MC lives in is labeled “High-Fantasy” for a reason, please don’t try to use normal physical laws, even though I´m trying to make it a little bit realistic.
6. The story is unique, yet slow-paced and I did my best to improve my writing quality/style and every critique previously stated, but in the end, I´m just doing it as a hobby, because it´s exciting and interesting.
I gave myself 4 stars because I see that I can improve myself further and I hope everyone will give it a try :3
Thanks for reading the review <3
I just got hooked. I just saw the novel and started reading and before I knew it I was 10 chapters in, then 20. The writing is really good and the plot is even better. I'm excited for the update.