MC is a bit of a hypocrite, anyone who uses women as tools are scum unless its him then its only natural to do so. Doesn’t fawn over every fairy he see’s which is nice but no matter how amazing of aloof and cold the woman is they because dunces the moment they meet the MC and choose to be his slave which is dumb but oh well. MC is like Changge from “I am the fated villain” except for this guy chooses to be borderline scum while Changge has to be because of his inheritance and system
yes i am giving my own fanfic a 5 star rating
The idea is promising but a few touches need to be made.1. More paragraphs: Few paragraphs make the work a little overbearing to read so please give paragraphs at most after three to four sentences.2. Spacing: At the end of certain sentences, there are no spaces giving no difference between the end of a sentence and the beginning of another. Overall, the plot is nice but it needs some editing.Keep up the good work by the way. Writing isn't easy
which 13 year old wrote this piece of.... oh.....
It’s a very solid novel, one of my favorites at the moment, and I think the author has done a great job improving on his writing.Compared to his other novel this one seems to have a more in depth world building and the power system is pretty incredible.My only complaints with this novel so far are:- Main character is extremely cunning, but many times his approach to fights or problems is just one of pure strenght with little strategy, which makes sense against equally powerful or weaker enemies, but he brute forces things even when against enemies or odds he shouldn’t be able to overcome with just power.- I believe there could be a bit more variation in the characters fighting styles and temperaments, most of Cain rivals so far just face him head on.- There are, if I’m not mistaken 6 races in aether, but we have barely seen any character that isn’t a juman be portrayed, not really something that is bad, but I’m curious to know a bit more about the other races.
ah I knew when reading the first chapter it seemed familiar. read it a long time ago when on ********** and novelupdates. its a great novel unfortunately stopped translating around the 60s ch and I think the original stopped around 100 and now the links are dead on novelupdates so am happy seeing it here. I hope you cont and finish the story if u can
Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
you should really add a monster mc tag thats really about it I wanted to say.
.
Right so I hate this novel. I don't know how it got picked here or how it was chosen but I hated reading this. You see I have an instinct in reading, when it' a good one i won't notice the hours go by and am usually absorbed in reading but when i read this it was like a chore. Some novels that are stretched too long usually gives me that feeling but this damn novel gave me that feeling and iv'e only read 40 chapters of this s#it. I have some controversial opinions like not liking the books made by IET, i mean they're refreshing the first maybe hundred chapters but by the 800's is goddamn exhausting to read and this piece of S#it gave that feeling just after 40 F#cking chapters! In F#cking conclusion i hope this novel burns in hell and i don't recommend this S#it at all! Thank you for reading my S#it review of my goddamn honest opinion. See ya.
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels +Get Hardcover Publish
Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing competition, both new and published stories can participate! This competition is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi. You can either submit your published works, rewrite some previous ideas, or create a new story if any given examples or tips inspired you! Web-fiction or Light Novel writing experience is desired, so you might be the winner!
For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy
or contact Email [email protected]
thanks for the effort and moreeeeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeee
Good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good booK good book good book good book good book good book good book