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you can check it out this book you will definitely like it
it have
heram + System + Money + rich life+ smart+rich second generation
Love the story, so f**king good i've ever read. Not gonna lie, the overall include translation, setting, characters, and narrative are amazing!!
Too good to skip this novel.
Saw female Mc, interest peaked. Good read, and interesting theme. Recommended to all.
Can we get the Clever protagonist tag removed? The main character is an idiot and ends up having to use a super power just to have a single clever thought. Has turned into a really boring 'horror' novel.
the main character is incredibly hateable, annoying and self entitled, and the synopsis is just wrong on many points
lots of cliches + endless luck + plot armor + illogical protagonist + formulaic characters + stupid enemies + endless repetition of the same plots = this novel. (English is not my native language)
• Writing quality ? 3*
There’s room for development. The writing looks too superficial and not deep at all. I can’t seem the be hooked by the story. The writing style is more descriptive than narrative.
• Story development ? 3*
A good directive line but with lot of inadequacies, doesn’t feel like how people normally react and behave in those described contexts and situations. A lot of surprising developments but the bad kind of surprises, or maybe very badly written. We don’t feel a sense of flow. The events feels rushed and not finished, we pass from one to another without a sense of cohesiveness.
• Character Design ? 1*
The author want so badly the MC to be calculative, smart, funny or intelligent. But it’s gross, disgusting and totally the opposite. There’s no consistency in his personality and so his actions. Sometime he’s dumb or smart, calculative or emotional. We expect here one reaction but it’s totally the opposite. I don’t understand this MC, I can’t identify myself in him.
I’m not that dumb and incoherent as a person.
• World Background ? 3*
There’s so much potential in that world background but the author completely messed it. He don’t seems to use that potential. The quality of story messed up the background. I want to know more about that world but not how the author brings it to us.
Overall, a big disappointment. It could have gone so much better. I don’t know the author, his experience and age. But it looks very very immature. Sorry
Interesting synopsis.
Waiting for the trail read .
How many floors should a bag of rice withstand, how many floors should a bag of rice withstand, how much should you pay for a bag of rice, how much should a bag of rice be washed, each grain is muddy, who gave you a bag of rice!
Spicy Tiansai! ! !
U know what? I thought I would definitely like it before when reading the early chaps but, as i read more chaps... I realized that... this is not my cup of tea...
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