Could be interesting but the writing is really choppy and disconnected. There are a lot of mistakes with tenses (past, current, future) that take you right out of the story. Unfortunately that makes this not worth paying for.
perfect hope to see more
I love the author work I following author since such a long time and much say she is really good in story telling
I absolutely love this book, It has so much depth and it's not all sunshine and roses which makes It that much more real. Hoping it will be finished soon! And if it's by any chance based on a true story, Noel is strong and amazing and worthy of love and happiness, hope she never believes otherwise!
Really loved the start of this book! The characters are well developed and they make you root for them. Plus they're really funny. I truly recommend this book!
i was attracted to read this because of the constriction of the sentences and how the author describe the events. \\"Move and your dead.\\" I like this line haha ang astig.
I see great potential.. keep up the good work.
Cute story! Needs some editing on the details, but otherwise it was a cute story.
The first chapter alone is impressive!. Well done?
well it really interested in to story at first.i was doubting it but I decided to give it a try it was worth it
love buat Varga ❤❤❤
Mar 20, 2023 Chapter 10