Smirking, Bianca gripped Javier's legs tightly. She wrapped her arms around his leg and pulled, trying to set him off balance. Javier pushed forwards with his one remaining foot and let himself be pulled towards Bianca. As they moved backwards Javier bent his legs suddenly and pulled Bianca back towards him. Using one fist he aimed at her face.
Unique and interesting, however had to lower the rating due to racism in later chapters.The rest is because the post has to be more than 140 characters
Adam nodded and stand up.
I would feel worse if I wrote up to 50 chapters and than stopped. I would be disappointing you guys more if I dragged this out and than dropped it when it was getting good. I myself hate it when that happens when I read something I like. And even worse, I would feel horrible if I kept forcing myself to do something I don't like anymore, I don't want to hate writing. I hate to say this and this decision kept me up last time but I have decided to drop this novel permanently. I deeply apologize to "peter3135566". You supported me from the beginning and I couldn't have made it this far without your comments. I hope you can forgive me for letting you down. I sincerely apologize to the new readers and the ones who have followed me since the beginning. I never thought it would come to this, but if you are still reading this, then thank you for reading my amateur novel, I am humbled. I won't delete this novel for it will serve as a reminder to myself to do better next time.
I nodded, "Bonnie must be happy. It's certainly a start."
All that I ask is you try developing the characters relationships. But I'm more focused on the actual language rather than plot because as you've noticed I just want to enjoy the story. So good luck and keep up the good work.
Leaving Way with no choice, but to fight it alone since the other villagers were no match for the might of this gorilla.
Yes, the reason why the room was so cold was coming from me. Just before the cold harshness of this feeling could swallow me completely, I suddenly feel my back becoming warm with someone's arms wrapping around me, I turn my head to look behind and find it to be my Uncle hugging me. I really would never be able to tell how much I needed that hug that made me feel so warm. he started saying softly to me
"Everyone, remember that after this, you are still you! You are still the same family, friend and guildmates and that will never change. Whatever happens out there, stay true to yourselves. I love you guys!" Isabelle said with a serious tone in her voice
The story is interesting! With the isekai and such. There are a few grammar issues but it’s not huge. I like it’s pace! Good work and keep it up!
can you continue this?......
Hey good story idea ?.but there are some problems . You are just straight introducing reforms in every ch .Story is about india not Vijaynagar empire . You start a thing in a ch but do not show the consequences it has and there is no continuity in it . The king is harming the interests of the nobles and the nobles do not do anything and just sit. If it was the in reality , ? he would have been assassinated?️ in 2 months. Also the truth is that an empire is not formed by fairness and do not talk about equality in 17th century. And even in today's era there is no equality. On one side the British and Mughals are aggressively transforming Hindus and you want to give fairness to all Muslims(no grudge) .I am not talking about just killing people of other religions .Reforms should be slowly applied and not suddenly. He is just a newly crowned king and does not have enough prestige. Medicinal kingdoms do not work on justice but ⚔️.