wow, i was binging reading the past 2 days, gotta say that the world building at start and the mystery was very interisting but it crashed in less than 30 chaps, the MC simply starts convincing people to joining him without any convincing, he just says come and people came... I don't see the MC being charismatic, and he gives no reason to... 1 time or 2 ok, but the way he convinced the grandmaster and was sure she was gonna obey was too forced, the number of 2D characters in this war arc was too much, all the kings and people in power are generic and simple forced to act simply to force a developtment, without convincing the reader... i guess the sin of the author was not to put a convincing insite of the characters thinking to make plauseble there actions... after this grandmaster being called vivi out of nowhere and became a obedient little puppy i just dropped... which is a shame since i liked the worldbuilding...
Good novel I like the way the story is going and the way the MC is op the only thing that upsets me slightly was when his fiance was kidnapped by that sect who said he was trash without even seeing him
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Mr Valmon Dain as a scientist, invented a machine which will be able to track voices communication over phones and using the means to report criminal act to the police but now he was In situation whereby the latest intimation no 34 he reported, the leader of the silver Arrow group happens to be her girlfriend's dad. Now watch out for what is going to happen next.
I have only read up to chapter 5 but will finish tomorrow because i'm tired. The story improved heavily from the first two chapters and I honestly like it a lot. Will make a more in depth review tomorrow, sorry for not being very in depth
Very dissapointing, trash tamer novels that get picked over actual quality...all your gona get is word count chapters, dragged story and sudden cliques.
I love it I would give it a all 5 but I didn't want people to think I put a 5 on everything without trying it's very good as the mc show no mercy is calculative and smart and ain't no pushover keep up the good work.
Very enjoyable story. I just hope that there will be a clear outline of cultivation. They character build is great but the Mc I always just getting drug around against his free will its a bit frustrating and the fact that his women is always getting beat up lol
Story is really telling of a reincarnation of a love one yet also an enemy of the her family.... but known to everyone the seed was growing within the subject and while he still could not remember his previous life.... He is still a threat to the love he desires most.... when he recovers his SOUL strength and recognize himself.Excellent author and translator.... my appreciation abs due respect and courtesy....
Good story. One of the 3 original novels that Im satisfied to read. No cliche plots and great creative writing. I always look forward to the updates. Just give it a go guys.
Hope you continue to translate the story.