The few chapters that I've read clearly depicted the main character's suffering. Her fears and insecurity were alarming, bringing me endless suspense. The book is also veiled in mystery. It's a nice one.
Amazing, the writing isn't professional level but it's good. I recommend it to any new readers on the platform. The sibling idea was rare, I already saw it from genshin impact but nothing else really.
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This is simply a little message that I wanted to send to you guys.
I've made the decision to make a few alterations ever since the protagonist changed into a girl during the "Castlemania" arc, at the end.
The protagonist was originally planned to remain a girl for around three arcs, which would have required 150 chapters, subtracting about 50 from "Castlemania" (100 chapters left).
Because the protagonist was originally going to be a female (one-time thing) due to the events of "Castlemania," I chose to return his gender in order to advance the plot.
I'd like to let you know that after the "Castlemania" storyline is complete, the protagonist will once more be a guy.
Love it so far, especially how he played the criminal and police haha?? ???????????????????????????????????
Just would like to say that the ntr is still in process and it still counts as ntr author.But other than that its shaping up to be a pretty unique story also hate ntr and I want to kill everyone right now.
Interesting story idea, good writing, and even understandable story with what's posted. I'd love to see more of this story. if I have one complaint it's that the author dropped it.
Lord author plzz plzz plzz plzz plzz plzz plzz plzz plzz plzz plzz plzz plzz plzz plzz plzz ???????????????????????????? update the novel
Review for a read till chapter 3.The style of writing is not really unique, childish perhaps. No real way around it besides constant writing. The review is more for aspects outside of Grammer. I hope youll stick to writing and deliver quality works in the future.The initial chapters bored me, something a Prologue should strive to be the opposite. The story was spread too wide, many days flying by with not much going on. Its best to start off the prologue with something exciting, thrilling, something to make the readers look forward to the next chapter. The nightmare is interesting but nothing urgent or thought provoking is happening. Character actions are simply written for the sake of it. Karma goes to school, does this, does that. There is no personality. I want to know who I am following in the story. There is a difference between 'Karma ate dinner and went to bed' vs 'Karma begrudgingly shoved a spoonful of spinach into his mouth. He swallowed it whole, an action that almost choked him to death. The taste was never pleasant. He had once blamed his mother for the taste. After many attempts of his own cooking, there was no saving it. The plant was simply never made to be eaten.'. There is a lot more personality in the latter.
Im giving 0 stars if i can, suddenly lock chapters when it wasnt before, it would be fine with me if you just locked the recently new chapters, but old chapters get locked and starting at around chapter 200? do you think thats not greed? thats not enough to feel the fun reading the stories and make me your daily readers. For the next reader, goodluck having irritated waiting daily.
Quite a good novel..I like it..The plot & character development not rushed, mc is not too overpowered..Hope to see new chapters soon..Good job to the author
It was a fine book but honestly I’m just writing this review for the fast pass to read another but it was really great and entertaining to watch.