KingofDezzNuts
Translator changes after ch 300.
He messes it up! It is becoming hard to read each chapter.
But overall the story is good. You can enjoy reading this!
kinda love the storyline, from the start to the middle of the novel, after entering the new world ark until the end, everything feels boring and the author doesn't seem to know how to continue the story and how this story will end. . its kinda bad ngl.
It I one of the best cultivation novels I've read and this novel alone is one of my most favorite list.
And this is the best ml I've ever seen... if any girl even gets the thought if harming the FL the only thing he does is... kill without mercy. Such ml are rare.
Although it's very long with hella amount if chapters but for me it was worth it!
Cheers, will give it a read
It looks interesting, I'll start with it
It's a really cute short story although I had a few issues with the female lead such as bad at making decisions and a little annoying at first but in the end I liked her! Really like the male lead (cause he's honest and isn't a jerk)The story isn't just about them though. Around chapter 130+ something, the story will be around their children and the future generations which kinda annoyed me cause I was hoping to see more of Lucretius and SaBina. Got bored after their story ended.Author should've just focused in them and their children. New characters at almost the end wasn't a great idea
This was a good read for me
I am author I can give whatever review I like . Rest is up to you if you like than review other than you can leave.
Great novel, I hope I can read till the end. Author is this your novel or are you translating. Hope you have a wonderful day [img=update][img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
This is my first time writing a review, but i think the story is interesting and I can't wait to see where it goes. So far, I've enjoyed the few chapters i've read, especially the little parts where Xiaodan interacts with Guangru. I do wish I have more chapters to read though... Overall, thank you for this :)
This is a typed MTL, with many flaws in the writing. It is a good story with a good flow, but the author typing from Google translate doesn’t know the sports slang and doesn’t know too much about English grammar.
For example, there are times I question whether this is a basketball novel or a cultivation novel due to the character having so many breakthroughs. Isn’t he immortal by now?
A relaxed dungeon crawling story. A good read for a chill time. Romance exists but is less in your face about it which is something I personally prefer.
