I'm the first review. The overall story is five stars. The plot is a bit generic with the portals and everything. I'd recommend giving it a shot.
Hello, Author here. I might as well get over with the custom too.
I think the synopsis is quite sufficient to give an idea, but I would recommend reading a few chapters. Though I have included a level-up system, the novel's base theme is not about it.
With that said, I hope the readers will give the novel a chance, and a review now and then would be much appreciated.
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Thanks :)
I don't care abt the hate comments. I know that you already founded your foundations so you can't make some major changes so the thing you can at least do is to improve. The first chapters have flaws, I can clearly see that the logic we think is different in here. However, despite of all that flaws, the story still managed to hook me up because of the FUN. A pure fun. You don't mind the errors, but just go with the flow. I know that people can't see the plot but at least there is FUN in there. People already forget what is fun and just focus on errors. We can clearly see that this is the root of author's improvement. Such flaws can't be fixed in the past so at least try to mold the future. Hope that the author can at least plan before write, that us at least the suggestion I can give.
amazing character development love the new abilities and the chance that more will come into the future. this novel has so much potential, love it!
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MC female, MC cry like a baby
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So far I have read up to chapter 1000, and I can say this novel a decent read.Pro: lot's of chapters, plenty of different characters, logical story line and interesting plots. Author goes into plenty of detail which can be a bit tedious but gives good background etc. The medical surgery scene was pretty interesting. Best part (imo) is he doesn't have an overly OP cheat ability, just a slight advantage + his prior knowledge.Cons: author will spend an entire chapter just in the thoughts of the MC, all the important characters surrounding him are women chasing after him, moderately dense MC that doesn't act his age or really reflect his background prior to migration. Author starts to get political at some points even writing a whole paragraph about how terrible the Republicans are and how corrupt the Democrats are. MC has background in Engineering yet the author clearly has no background in technology. Author needs to learn how to use commas and possessive grammar rules.Overall, it's probably not the best thing on Webnovel, but definitely a good read for while you wait for other stuff to update.
Shameless Author Review. Max has been reincarnated into a world of Mecha and an ongoing Galaxy wide war. He gets off to a rocky start, with a crazy mother, but his fortunes will quickly change once he begins his mandatory education at the Military Academy and the System dormant in his body fully activates. Follow along as he builds himself up into the greatest Mecha Warrior humanity has ever known.
This story is very interesting to continue to follow. The plot is well structured and the words are well used. To be honest, I almost never read stories about games and this makes me a little confused hihiBut, no problem. I like this ?To author... Fighting ??
This book would have potential but in my point of view...?For one MC can fight with beings that are waaaaaay stronger than him yet his strength is at level 6! like WHAT????!!!!!!!Secondly the imbalance between his stats is just a joy like...let me explain am a chap 47 and throughout the whole time he only adds points to he's intelligence ? yet he's so fast and defits beings stronger than him. Yes I know ? it helps his mana but isn't strength agility and whatnot required and I think that's one of the reasons this book is lagging so muchAlso what is this no gender balance. MC doesn't fight women like I get be respectful but he's in a world of dog bite dog a woman can kill , fight and does many more to men and vice versa can happen yet MC does fight women ??Honestly I come & go cause I need FP & also am bored but this novel would have done better but it lacks alot . I personally wouldn't have continued this book but the more read the more you think about it .I hope MC improves not only psychically but mentally tooTho he reincarnated he's stupid ?anyways I hope I get I reply cause I need some motivation to continue.but it isn't a bad book just would never make it to top 50
I like the novel. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Do not be fooled!! the author is a Chinese person who disguises himself and writes a novel on Webnovel. From World 1 Looksim And World 2 True Beauty. After the MC completed the 2nd world, the MC in the real world became smart, rich and got a reputation because he created a Google company and etc. But when in the 3rd and 4th world the writer showed his true self in spreading Chinese culture