League of legends inspired. Good writing, not typical super cringe ****. Bit too powerful, but not drastically so. Highly recommend for a litrpg style book
2 is a stretch to me. The direction of the story's quality saved it from being a 1. The grammar and writing quality butchered the novel. The novel had a good story with the laws and mc's character, but again the writing quality completely butchered the story. I am not expecting professional but it's worse than machine translations. You will need to reread and hope you understood it right to not be confused.
(Some titles, names, and numbers are not consistent) and got switched which threw me off.
Some facts are like copy and paste. Even more the novel was like random words to make the certain word count. The novel had potential but the writing quality discouraged me from continuing reading
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The beginning is rough with story plot problems, I apologize, I am trying to improve.
MC will be dating a female and male, if that is not your taste, please drop my story with no hate. Relationship is PG. Only profanity and fighting is R18.
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i do not like this novel, just being honest, and i just don't want to read it. But it keep giving me it for my free daily reading, and i want it to stop.
For this review, let's quickly dive in!The author is - clearly - talented in everything realistic fiction. The depth of the characters is all detailed and easily understood. The first chapter alone had me hooked, and I can't wait to read more chapters! From me, it comes highly recommended for reading and I guarantee you won't regret reading this novel!- mari <3
I started reading today this Novel and I see great potential in it especially knowing that Yun Tianlong is not one of those MCs o pursue immortality like crazy.
I'd like to remind that this is entirely my own opinion and only based upon everything up to chapter 18. (Because there wasn't more published yet.)Writing Quality:Recogniseable the writing of an expirienced author. Story Development:This is a very Action driven Story, fast paced but comftable enough in speed to not get to quickly exhausted. Character Design:An opportunistic Demon with revenge Fantasies towards the gods that wronged him. I am curious how he might change throughout the Story. Update stability:What's to say? The writer does still write, so good. I guess...World Background:The World grows gradually with the Maincharacters own reach. Starting small as a snail only to grow with him. Summary:Cute apex preditor snail is cute.
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