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The mc is incredibly ignorant and the story feels too forced. Some how the Heavenly Dao is unable to broadcast to the whole planet and everyone but the mc is in range of the heavenly Dao. Even though heavenly Dao couldn't broadcast to mc it could still send the rewards? Good luck.
So far interesting. I would like to see it continued.
It is a different take on a supreme cultivator being focused on his family.
I have to say that reading this brought a lot of nostalgia. It was only a few years ago that I've seen a the original charm of wuxia, xanxia, and all that.
This is a throwback novel against all the system, sign-in, and overpowered stuff that is hip nowadays.
It is funny that the nostalgia doesn't stop there. For people who read Machine Translations, this brings that vibe as there is still a lot of work that needs to be done with wording and all that. Spacing work needs a lot of polishing as well.
I trust the author would improve on that and I could only advice to use Grammarly if he could.
As requested by author , dropping a 5 star review. Please keep it up and dont drop this!
I am waiting for to see how this goes ...........................
new wibe about story settings
world building is slow
story progression is medium
new story line
just some loop holes in plot
new wibe about story settings
world building is slow
story progression is medium
new story line
just some loop holes in plot
The story is refreshing. What a surprise!
I really love alchemist profession because of Xiao Yan of BTTH, i really hope this new book of alchemist last long and the TL would continue translating this please feed us more chapters
The story is nice and all... but sometimes it feels like you write in a hurry,
I mean, you sometimes skip events a lot and also pass some nice points in the story so easily. it's as if you want to force the story to move faster. please don't hurry and take your time, let the story grow by itself
But except that everything else is fine, I like the characters and the mysterious storyline.
overall i cant really say much since this book barely have less than 10 chapters. But the style of how the author explaining the situation is great.
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Passionate!
Fabulously written.
Story development is amazing.
The FL is strong, cunning, clever and smart.
The sibling bond, the hidden truths, and revenge everything is first class! a must try book.