Definitely potential, but let's see where the author is going to take us.by the way, I am the author of this novel. I am here just to post a comment and see if I can find it by search.
Good but i hate multiple leads?. ...........................-............
The writing quality is good, but not as good as it could be. I think that the story develops way too quickly from the start. Rita is a pretty good character. Overall, the book is good, but has lots more potential.
A well constructed story. First few chapters manage to pull me in and I'm thoroughly bought by the plot. Characters seems well thought out. Waiting for more ! ❤️❤️❤️❤️
Im going to be honest, started out great... 300 chapters in... well lets just say Im done... too many unused Ideas just thrown in there for filler... and they don't go anywhere... I really liked it at first, maybe some work and this would be amazing...
If I have to read one more time just how awesome China is and how faking car accidents is a sing of a stable government, I will find a way to reduce this novel to a 1 star rating.
If you haven't guessed it yet, this novel takes nationalism to the extreme.
Did the head of China’s propoganda machine choose this weeks trial read??! Most of the novels are either shoving nationalism down your throught or will be in the future. Fucking waste
Honestly this wouldve been a good story if the MC wasnt a idiot. Like my guy got enslaved and abused and he just accepts it like its normal.. If it were me I would try to escape because from what I can see all her class did was bring him back to life and connect their mana, her orders can still be ignored as we have seen already, he can literally just escape and she cant do anything.
The romance is honestly forced because of the above reason man, if you were going to have him be a zombie to her then at least make it so that she is originally his friend that way he wouldnt have a problem protecting her when he got revived :/
Writing Quality - 4
Stability - 3
Story Dev - 2
Character design - 2
World Background - 2
I love the concept of this novel but I cant accept the fact that the mc went from being rebellious to being a servant who completely adores his owner. I know that they have been together for a long time but the girl treated the mc like dirt and you expect me to believe the mc has become completely loyal from this.
Shynobi here... I'll be shameless to give myself a vote. This is another concept novel that I will update 1 chapter a day. If many likes it and it reaches enough reader traction, I will take out the draft I have for it and continue writing. Thanks to all those who take their time to read my novels... Love you guys!
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i thought fan-fic is hard to get through webnovel's system, because of copyright issues, i think this is the first one that should be a fan fic in here(released by webnovel), just based on similarities on OPM, like the training and balding stuff.
Idk what to expect, but we'll see if this can really reach trial read or the Editor's not paying attention.