well a good novel with an intersting approach of fantasy powers the background of the mc is mind blowing i already read story with a similar problem for the mc but this one is introduced in a way that make the readers think that the mc might not survive for long overall a good story
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The MC was ok in the beginning with an ok background and a cool OP ability and all that. The MC finds a cave with a lot of cool stuff in it that I found interesting then he decides to go into town and read up on the history of the world he was in. He then decides to go to an auction which is okay I guess,like he probably has better stuff anyway but ok. Then he buys some demon girl for "information" and I thought it would be cool if he becomes his servant or bodyguard or something like that but no,she becomes his love interest or something which doesn't make any sense considering of his history and the girls! I guess the author wanted to make him softer so he did this
or author wanted romance in the first place and didn't do it well. All in all the plot was interesting and I liked the MC in the beginning but after the romance started it messed with plot and just made MC and the girl really annoying,in short romance was forced and it wasn't enjoyable after that.
Alright, so first is writing quality. The writing quality here is just amazing, hundreds of times better than most authors on the site. Just truly commendable.
Second is stability of updates. I'm forced to give this a 4 because it is still too early to tell if the author will be updating on a regular schedule or not.
Next is story development, which is just a bit too slow for me. I don't really know why, it's just slow in the beginning, but I promise it picks up more, so don't think it's that much of a bad thing.
Next is story development, which seems really cliche right now. There isn't anything unique yet, so another 4.
Finally, world background. Although the world background is really unique on the platform, I think it still needs to be more unique than some mainstream novels, because it seems like you're just replacing one ring with many rings. I'll be waiting for something unique to happen.
Overall, a really good novel, would definitely recommend it casually.
It's really good. So far, the updates has been very satisfying and the way it is written is very good in my own opinion. Although not many people may like it because its not on a mature theme. It feels like pokemon to me but in a uniquie way.
Hi, the author so far so good novel. Maybe it's part of the fiction but it gives you a real heart-wrench feeling. The way the Novel describes Hassan and his family's struggle makes it a must-read to inspire everyone. Best of luck dear.
This is quite a good story about a cultivation world. With good writing quality and story development. The characters design is quite at an average quality. But the stability of chapters release is bad.
This should be categorized as science fiction man.. I don't know looks like it. The writer had described the different personality of the characters.. It's better than I expected..
great so far. I wish there was more released
This book is awesome. It hasnt disappointed me at all. I cant wait to see what the author does to give the MC more powers and maybe more elements to use. But the biggest thing is that if you comment at tue end of the chapter and its relevant then the author will take ot into consideration with I think is one 9f the best things in an author because it shows they care and r trying there best to incorporate what u say to make the story better. keep up the great work!!!
no space marine ??? then bye for now maybe in future when I had more time to waste I come back to read warhammer that had no space marine