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It is a really nice story, that i think has potential.
So please read it and tell the author what you think about his work.
Please read, please please please.
The writing is okay, there are some grammar mistakes as well as misplaced and misspelled words, even in the synopsis. But this can be edited and fixed easily. The plot seems interesting, however, it seemed a bit too fast-paced, not to mention, the storytelling was honestly mid. The buildups were not tense because of this. The introduction of the Mc was also a little lackluster and boring, I see what you were trying to do but the execution wasn’t good. All in all, the novel isn’t bad, it’s easy to tell your a inexperienced but I’m sure with the right amount of time you could deform this and make it much better.
I can hardly find any reincarnate stories as good as this. I could hardly make any errors. That alone was impressive but to be genuine the first chapter has to be..., u know what I mean to enable the readers to read more. I'm not criticizing but am just being genuine but apart from that everything seems to go nice and the pargraphs are put in order. I just love the top-notch vibe it's giving.
I'm enjoying interaction theo and irene i
I have been reading this novel on mtl. It is pretty decent and average. I really can't say it is good but it is not that bad. I can skip some chapters and not miss a thing due to how boring some chapters are in mtl. Hoping it would be better when properly translated. I can say this is a better consolation prize with how the previous pick are. Webnovel have embargoed all of the rights to translate novels so not much competition and this makes them really lazy in picking good novels to translate. Communist sucks.
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Author's Note-
For the Knights Multiverse Story, you can begin the story from Volume 1 normally, or start with the Prologue in Volume 0. The Prologue is recommended to let the user become familiar with how the world works in this story, and to give a slight peek into the past on how everything came to be.
Hi shameless author is here.
I got bad news, and hopefully I can recover soon.
I don't think I can make it but, I am positive for corona virus.
I have been try to go to hospital, but everything is full.
Hopefully I can make it, and keep on trying to survive.
I know my book is not that good for some people, but at least I write what I like.
I just appreciate it for anyone that would like to read my book event thought it's far for perfect book, but at least I try to write about it.
I just wanna say thank you ,to anyone that would like to read my book,and hopefully I can still survive.
Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
This book has a very unique plot. At first the title made me grin, not knowing what to expect, but the idea is really cool. The scenes are nicely built and the author posesses a broad vocabulary and a lot of imagination.
Keep up the good work! :)
After arriving at chapter 18,i realise that the synopsis is wrong. It's either wrong or its in future which I don't think so... Anyway, I had read it until 19th chapter and it kind of... Monotonous? Because he gain the double cash back, then everything just fell on his lap like "I just need to spend money to destroy the world economy.."... Hurm... I don't know, maybe you guys will like it... For me, it kind of on off stuff.. But I would still recommend you guys to read it..
I like the story simply because it's a faction building genre. I saw somebody that rate it low saying what's the point of reading a novel when the Mc is already dead and there's no clear way of reviving him, and all I could say is that he was just a new who haven't read enough of cn webnovel.
!!! SPOILERS BELOW !!!
I've read ahead by mtl which surprisingly readable and by chapter 80ish he got a reward where he could revive for 3 hours with his cultivation at his peak again. Not only that, after the lu chaoxi breakthrough to the next major realm, he could now continue to cultivate.
The story might be slower than your usual cultivation webnovel but I think it's not slow enough to bore you, at least that's my opinion.
All in all, I recommend anyone who wish read a more faction development based novel.
*I made the review after reading till chapter 130 in mtl*