Keep it up author! This novel will soom rise to the top! This novel is one of the best out there and a hidden gem! It was so good and amazing! Don't drop or it would be a shame. Top 25 here we go!
A good story that is ultimately weighed down by two big issues. Firstly, there is such a thing as too much detail. There were many times in the story I was reading when too many small things were talked about. Like going to one place only to be turned away because he needs *blank*. So he goes to get *blank* only for it to be a long drawn-out process. This happens a lot, and I keep asking myself: "Did you really need to take time to include all these useless things?" It really feels like the word count is unnecessarily padded. The other issue is the MC knows LITERALLY nothing. Imagine a little kid following you around asking the most obvious questions for several hours. And no matter how much they learn, even the slightest hint of anything new leads to a barrage of new questions. I'm surprised the MC knows how to BREATHE without being told how to do it.
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I truly love it. If there is word to define what I feel, I will say it's about freshness. This story reminds me about a RTW fanfiction about being reincarnated as rock and wielding magic, except this one actually have original framework so it has more materials to develop.
The only concern that I have is the sentence structure, it might be some residual dialect of the author that makes me have some difficulties to get the nuance being implied. I also found some sentences/phrases that I believe can be shortened/rephrased and still retains its intent. The need of the editor is quite high for this work, nonetheless the story itself is amazing, it's a really great take on the way of plant's life. Do you know that, after reading this story, I did self reflection about our treatment over plant and animal...
I will add this, you might add a chapter about cultivation jargon especially the power level, to clear some ideas
i love this book.
author please continue.
all is great, the development and new plot twist. i can’t wait for what’s coming next.
This is my first novel, so please be forgiving with the story. If you have any suggestion, crirics, or anything, I'd love to have them. Seriously though I need them it's kinda dead without the lol
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Great story has a lot of potential and the horns or tail part i would choose horn because it looks freaking badass. Well anyway don t abdoned this story and I'll try to give a power st o e everyday
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the story itself is good, the pacing is just slow. it reminds me of Fey Evolution Merchant a lot. it has references that made me think of FEM like the floating city in the back of the whale, definitely want this to be picked.
So first of beware that this novel isn't too serious a novel. So if that is what you're looking for I would reccomend you to look for something else. Now that we are past that the writing is of good quality besides a few typos here and there I can't seem to find much errors in it. The mc's character isn't all too deep, but I feel the author is trying his best and besides it is hard to make a deep and relatable mc in novels like this. World seems interesting with stones that allow for people to reincarnate and how the tribulations are decided be a bunch of scummy immortals. Updates are pretty stable and good in amount, the only time there where no updates was when the author was moving out so props for that. Yeah I guess that's about it all in all its worth a shot.
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