Just caught up with the first seven chapters and I have to say, it’s quite a good start, at first, the pacing is a bit slow as the author mentioned too, as they are trying to lay out the world, there is also heavy info on the power system. But honestly, that slow burn really works here. It gives you time to soak in all the details and start piecing things together.The power system and the unique way of "borrowing" mana and the veil is a very interesting concept, personally I liked it alot.Aric Oswin, wakes up in this fantasy world in someone else's body, quite a generic start but hey the build-up was very good, you get the sense that things aren’t going to be easy for him. And the whole idea of being guided—or maybe manipulated—by the mysterious voice not knowing what will happen to him is quite good.Overall, the story sets up a lot of tension and mystery, and I'm excited to see where it goes. I'm hooked and curious to see how the story progresses.I will be giving it 5 stars for now to support, but this may change depending on the progression of the story.
good, like this is way too good oh and this is an honest review i am not a bot you can check my profile to confirm it ,this novel has a lot of potential believe IT writing quality is peak, that is it's at the level of most popular novels out there story development is great each ch up till now was really fun and necessary so author isn't extending it nor is he going to fast i don't know how to rate character designs but i guess it should be okay especially in world background cause the whole world and it's power system is very unique or at least i have never seen this before at the beginning it feels a bit like shadow slave but after entering the trials it's completely different with some minor similarities that don't change my opinion of the story and i believe it's a great novelthe power system is really interesting
Author, honestly speaking it is good.But sometimes you forget to write the system totally and you should use small phrases.It will be good if you make an auxiliary chapter for stats and world building
I so much love your book Salvy Queen and your characters designs are extraordinary. But some of the names are being written in Chinese maybe you can amen that. xoxo
"I will destroy you…" Sona snapped
Even so, we can still watch over them with our Magic Eye. Magic that can hear and see them from our earthly land or the sky for them.
"Yehey" said V while jumping around.
I think that this might be a fun idea to start with. I'm just bored ans it's about time I break free of this wall.
"What are you saying?" Her father asked, going on the defensive.
"It's not working" Gasper cries out but it falls on deaf ears as Akeno fires her charged up lightening attack only to watch in horror as the Dragon seems to take next to no damage from her attack whatsoever.
"I am sorry, did I hurt you , wait let me help u get up "
Musa! Ahmad Musuyani screamed at him don't try my patience at all, you sound like an incompetent fool, what is so difficult in abducting a simple lady for you? ehn? you better start telling what I want to hear now or you won't like what I do to you next.