The plot looks promising, I can’t wait to dig into this and enjoy everything I know this will give me. Always waiting for updates❤️ love it !Whenever there’s a new update please keep me informed and update your schedule so I know to look out for your book.
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Thank you for all these free chapters. I'm very grateful for your hard work. The only problems are how you often mix up genders and names, and also quite a few grammatical errors. However, the translation is still wayyy better than MTLs out there.
Thanks for the good story, i really love the creative concept behind it but your writing quality does not do justice to this good novel, sometimes you misplaced the genders of the characters and the story development and world background is lacking, if you could describe both worlds backgrounds it would be really helpful, please keep up the good work even if you don't improve I'll still continue to read.
The story reminds me of Takt Op. Destiny anime. The power of music to the enemy. I'm curious about this power source and it's development. Great work! Keep it up!
This is a very good book and i enjoyed it so much. Thanks for the writing Mr.Author
I wanted this book to get to the tenth chapter before I upload my review but no. I'm enjoying every paragraph and scenes. Karl and Fortuna's relationship is disturbing. How can I stay without love and think all is well? Definitely when Karl falls for Katrina, hell will loose!
Ok, from what I've seen, Orion doesn't have many achievements after receiving his cultivation but I think it's acceptable because with his power it would be somewhat unrealistic to lose in a battle, the scenes between the female characters are played out, apparently a harem, I'm waiting for more content.
Hi dear readers, author here. I have waited a little while until I made my own review. I tried writing another modern novel with some angst and heart breaks. I am planning to make this story short but full of roller coaster of emotions.I hope you will like this. Have a good time reading.
It's a pretty good and interesting story, it was also very funny at times but the harem kinda ruined it for me.'OH wow the MC is the only person who doesn't get scared of my cold/mean personality, now I like him''The MC was nice to me when I was a child and now he is the only thing I can think about, he is my everything''When I broke through to the Golden Core realm the MC had to rape me in order to save my life, now I'm in love with him'And so far, all the girls are okay with him having multiple girls or simply ignore it.It does not make any sense. If you're going to put romance in your novel then at least do it well, doing a harem is the most laziest and unoriginal type of romance there is.
Have to say, story could be better, but author has so many mistakes, often using the wrong words, which is very annoying, some readers even pointed some mistakes out, but author just ignores it. Is it so hard to proof read?Story is okay, but nothing which truly captures me, wish I hadnt unlocked all chapters, a waste of my coins. The story has truly good moments, but overall I wouldnt recommend it
Updating Stability is great. 7 chaps almost a week, but I personally think you should post 21 chaps a week.Translation Quality is fabulous. Although, you mentioned that English isn't your native language, I haven't spotted a single mistake yet (hope it doesn't change).Story Development is a bit slow but, I think it's because it's still in the initial stages, but I like it this way.Character Design is fantastic. Especially, Alice Lee's. Oh my god! She is outstanding!World Background, from what I've read this far you are planning to expand it slowly. Take your time. So long, as you can, work on some improvements, this novel will one day stand on top of all novels!